Friday, August 31, 2007

Creative Juices

I know you all have great ideas in your heads because I get to hear them all day long. Now, get those creative juices going and write an ending to the following story starter. Be sure to use 100 words and check your spelling and grammar.

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw.....

46 comments:

Anonymous said...

A pink cow! Yes, you heard me a pink cow! There he was watching this pink cow and the pink cow came up and started singing got him. Pete thought it was both cool and weird. Then the cow stopped singing and said,” How are you my name is Parywinkicle, kind of like the color but spelled different, what’s your name?" Pete just stood there mouth up in wow. "we fa easdf faba." babaled Pete,” I mean Pete!"
Then a voice was calling his name he rubbed his eyes and saw his mom.
"Your going to be late to school.” said his mom. So Pete got up and got ready but when he was packing his back he saw a book that read All about pink cows' in side a the cover said, "Hope next time is a little more successful love
Parywinkicle the pink cow." then Pete rubbed his eyes to see if it was real when he opened his eyes the book vanished.

Anonymous said...

Sorry, got him after singing is not supposed to be there and nether is 'a' after in side

Anonymous said...

a beautiful horse named Santana Belle(Belle for short). Belle was a beautiful Thoroughbred Arabian mare standing at 15.3 hands. Her mane was a rich black with beautiful soft baby pink velvet streaming through it. Belle wore a beautiful english saddle made of the finest brown leather along with a new snowflake white saddle pad with sparkles sprinkling over it. She also had a new hackamore bridle with braided leather running over her nose to the connection of the headstall. As soon as Pete returned from his moment of shock he put on his black velvet covered riding helmet that went pefectly with his tan breeches and black jacket and mounted the beautiful horse for his ride.
* * *
Pete kicked Belle into action as he entered the level A dressage ring. As soon as he felt the steady beat of walking hooves under him he relaxed and soluted the judges.
* * *
Pete exited the ring with a blue ribbon on Belles bridle and a sense of accomplishment.

THE END
By: Dani

Anonymous said...

Hey miss miller,

did u like reading all 158 comments or did u just say u did and didn't!
Hehehe

Anonymous said...

his little sister Sarah. “Pete! Pete!”, Sarah shouted. Look at this cool pencil I found!” “Yeah, yeah, yeah put it in your pocket and let’s go home.” As Pete and his sister rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw… Mary Poppins!!! “Hello children!” she said. “I was flying to England to help some children when the generator for my umbrella fell out. Oh please children, will you help me?” “Of course!” Sarah and Pete answered at the same time. “Ok then. Lets start looking. It’s reddish, pencil shaped, and clear. Do you think you can find it?” “Of course Marry Poppins!!” Again they answered at the same time. So they started to look. They looked high and low, east and west, under things and over things but they could not find the generator. “Well children I’ll just have to write a letter to the children in England and tell them I’m not coming.” “Well ok.” Pete said. “Sarah you give her your pencil and I think I have a piece of paper.” “That’s it!” shouted Marry Poppins. “That’s what?” Pete asked. “That’s the generator!” “ Sarah’s pencil?” “Yes! Oh, thank you child thank you!” “So I guess you’ll be going now, huh?” Sarah said ready to cry. “Oh, don’t worry child. I’ll be back. But for now, Toodles!!!” So she plugged in her generator and flew away.
THE END (of Pete and Sarah anyway)

Anonymous said...

a black lab. Pete could'nt resist his cute adorable eyes he needed to have that dog. "O'Great"he thought I forgot about fathers rule, only two legged people alowed. "Pete oh Pete" Holly Rye announced I know what your up to and you are going to need some help. Holly was Pete's next door neighbor mind readier. I think I can help you. Holly do not need your help,'Well I know that" Holly squealed. Ok so heres what we are going to do Pete I need you to go get some paint and some of your mothers fake nails. "Holly " Pete screamed as he went to go get the materials. He brought the materials to Holly. Ok go home pete I shall bring the two legged person to you at 2:00. This better be perfect Holly or else. As soon as Pete left Holly went right to work. If Pete doesn't beileve I can do it I'll show him a piece of my mind. After she was done with her paint and fingernail job she trained the dog to open his mouth really wide and growl. The word she used to train him was food. She took the dog and went over to Pete's house rang the door bell and ran away when Pete anwsered the door Holly shouted "Food". The dog stood up on both legs put Petes mothers nails up and growled really loud. Pete ran like the wind and shouted "Bear" "Bear" help me. Holly skipped away singing that will teach him never to mess with the hollinater.

Anonymous said...

he saw his little 3 year old sister
Molly. "Pwet Pwet" for some reason his little sister couldn't pronounce his name. "What" Peter moaned. "Molly and Pwet to school" said Molly very energetic. "No Molly school is next month". "NO"! "MOLLY GO NOW"! "Molly" Said peter getting frustrated. "School isn't open". Molly grunted folded her arms and stomped off. The next month when it came time for school. Molly didn't want to go. "Molly last month you wanted to go to school why don't you want to go now"?
" School start next month". AHHHHHHH" yelled peter. "what wrong Pwet" Molly asked. " You"!sreamed Peter.

Anonymous said...

a new puppy waiting for him! The puppy was so small that he could fit in the palm of his hand. He was brown and black and had white spots. He was EXTREMELY warm and fuzzy. He ran up to Pete and started jumping up on his legs and was licking his face. His tongue felt like sandpaper and it hurt, but Pete didn’t care…He liked it. Pete found his parents and hugged them as hard as he could for getting him the puppy. A few minutes later, Pete was already taking him for a walk. Everyone in the neighborhood seemed to ADORE his new puppy! But, there was only 1 problem…He couldn’t think of a name for the puppy. He asked everybody for suggestions…but he couldn’t decide on one. Finally, an idea popped into his head! He decided to name his puppy Bob. Pete took care of Bob and loved him with all his heart.

Anonymous said...

His house in flames. Pete didn’t know what to think. He was panicking, not knowing who was in his house and why it was in fire. He saw his mom running out of his neighbor’s house; she told Pete that she had called the local fire department from his neighbor’s house. In a few minuets Pete heard sirens and the fire department arrived. In an hour they had put out the fire. Pete and his family ended up rebuilding a new house and lived there happily ever after.

Anonymous said...

(continued) with his house never burning down again.

Sorry about that

Anonymous said...

a small dog shivering in the corner of his front steps. pete seeing that the dog was only the size of a computer mouse picked it up and brought the small dog in. the dog had a small coller on that said daisey. pete got daisey some bread crumbs she ate them like a vaccum cleaner. daisey was yawning quite a bit so pete put daisey in his little sisters barbie bed. she fell asleep quickly. while daisy was sleeping pete went and told his mother about daisey and asked if he could keep her his mom agreed to let daisey stay. daisy was loved so much by pete and his family! pete was very glad to help a friend in need. daisey was glad to!!

Anonymous said...

"A MONSTER THE SIZE OF GAINT ELEVEN FOOT TALL SKY SCAPER. IT WAS FURRY, BLACK, SCARY AND HAD CLAWS.IT WAS ALSO IN THE SHAPE OF A BEAR. EVERYONE CALLED IT THE BEARZILLA. IT HAD CAWS AS LONG AS SIX-TEN FEET LONG. THE BEARZILLA WAS ASLEEP AND PETE TRY TO BE QUIET AS COULD BE BUT,THE LOUD SOUND OF HIS CHATTERING TEEH AND CLASHING KNEE WOKE THE BEARZILLA UP. HE LOOKED AROUND TO SEE WHAT THE BEARZILLA WAS GOING TO DO.AND THEN ..." "THATS THE END FOR TONIGHT BOYS," THE FATHER SAID. THE BOYS SAID IN UNISON"THAT WAS THE SCARIEST STORY EVER." THE END

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner he stood in shock as he saw his dog running around his house that was burning down and ghosts with swords were swarming and fighting the U.S. Army who were also eating pickles that were being made by witches who were flying around on broomsticks. Now all this was halted by one word, “STOP!” screamed Pete. Pickles and swords simultaneously fell to the ground. Everything stopped, even Pete’s house flickered out. “What’s going on?” Pete asked. “Ummmmm nothing.” said the Army general. “They started it.,” said the ghosts pointing to the witches and suddenly everyone was yelling. “SILENCE!” screamed Pete. Spike (Pete’s dog) surprisingly spoke up “You left the oven on this morning and the house started on fire and all the ghosts in the house flew out and then the U.S. Army came to fight the ghosts and had a craving for pickles so they called the witches so they could make them pickles. And that’s what happened so Pete had the witches fix the house. And so they lived happily ever after until the next day when Pete rounded the corner again. THE END

Anonymous said...

he saw a mountain, he wondered what was on it so he decided to climb to the top of it. He started out and saw a sytar. He asked were he was and it said he was on nutland. It also said that the ruler nutty man was taking over every mountain in the world. He had to stop it from taking over all of the mountains because he lived on one. He started to climb, he saw a dragon and asked can you fly me to the top. It said how would you like it if someone always asked you if they could ride you. Sorry says Pete. He starts up again. Then he sees a hole in the top of the mounbtain. He looks down it and sees a giant peanut. He jumps down and lights a match he stole from the sytar. and lights the sticks on the ground. Nutty Man wakes up and calls his minnions who, well you know peanuts. Pete jumps on Nutty Man and gets out. and everyone gives him stuff. THE END=-)

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner he stood in shock when he saw a ferocious bull charging straight for him. He noticed he was wearing a red Michael Vick jersey! He turned around to run away but there was a elephant running toward him! Then he dashed out of the way. The elephant and the bull collided. It shook the earth when the hit each other. I then started my way home again thinking of why there was a elephant and bull on the sidewalk. Then I looked up and there where monkeys on top of a car screaming like maniacs. Then I said out loud,” What is this Jumangi!” I finally got home and there was a hippo in our pool! I just decided to go to bed accept there was a lion in my bedroom so I just slept on the couch. I woke up the next day and everything was back to normal accept my friends. There never normal!

Anonymous said...

The greatest pleasure in life is doing what people say you cannot do!
MY FAVORITE QUOTE!

Anonymous said...

... nothing, he stared in amazement nothing how could those people giving Coleton Lempke those ideas give this guy pete nothing to do terrible how terrible. So Pete dragged himself home "nothing" he mumbled then he realized there was a note on the counter "yes" victory something has happened to Pete "Pete went to go destroy the monkey man and save the 9th demension Love Mother ............ "My mom tells me to go for walk and nothing happens but then she zooms off to fight alien monkeys!" unbeliveble

Anonymous said...

[continued] so then he dragged himself up to his room and played video games until his mom got back. and that was Petes horrible day.

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

…a baby panda whimpering on the sidewalk. Pete felt so bad that he scooped it up and cradled it like a baby. It immediately stopped whimpering and fell asleep. He power walked home so the baby panda wouldn’t be startled. When he got home he showed his mom. She said that he should call the zoo. They answered and told him that they didn’t know what to do so they gave then the
San Diego zoo phone number. While Pete’s mom called the San Diego zoo, Pete made a soft bed for the baby panda and then laid it in there. When Pete’s mom got off the phone she told him that they had to fly with the baby panda to the San Diego zoo. After they got ready they flew over there and handed the baby over then they flew back. Pete said he will always remember that day but he will always wonder how it got there.

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

...a orphaned colt on the side of the rode. Pete rushed over to the baby and just stroked the colt for a while. The colt was a chestnut pinto with a map of the USA on his side. The colt stared at him with big, brown eyes. It almost looked like he was saying "I'm no threat to you,I like you!" So Pete took the colt home. Pete had a 8-year old Pinto mare named Spirit. She only had 1 baby, but he died. Pete thought that maybe she could care for the colt. He put the two in a stall. Spirit sniffed the colt for a while, then she started to groom the colt. She did accept him!! Pete decided to name the colt Patriot, because of the map on his side and because he had the "Spirit" of a "Patriot". And Spirit and Patriot live happily ever after.

Anonymous said...

......He shouted were is my teddy bear.His mom came up stairs and said what's wrong? He said I lost my teddy bear and I know I left him right there. His mom said, well let's search the house. After an hour of looking, Pete was still crying. So that night he crawled in to bed in tears. His mom said I'm sure we will find him. The next day Pete went to school with no teddy bear at all. While he was at school, his mom looked even harder than she did before for his teddy bear but she could not find his it. When he came home he went to go cry in his room. When Pete's mom was doing the wash she found his teddy bear in the laundry basket. So she went up to his room and gave him his teddy bear. He did not cry for the rest of the day he was so so so so happy!

Anonymous said...

Pete came around the corner and saw a evil donkey, it was mad with power but pete new what to do.He tried wrestling with the donkey but it was to strong for pete to to handle.Pete went to his Jimmy's house and asked if Jimmy wanted to wrestle a evil deranged donkey?Jimmy said "Heck yeah I would love to go".So Pete and Jimmy went to go wrestle the deranged evil donkey but it wasn't there.Jimmy asked was this some sort of prank.He replied no but Jimmy went home anywhy.He went back to his home and found the donkey by his bed.He woke up and fond out it was alla dream.

Anonymous said...

As pete came around the corner he saw a giant gorilla named george. george allways chases pete around so pete though he could buld a giant lion to scare george away and that is exactly what he did
but he though it would take alot of time to build and alot of parts and tools and he would need a place to build it so a week passed then he started to build it he needed to run back and fourth to get parts and tools he had finally finished it he wated a few days till he had school and the lion worked and now he can make a sound and the lion cones to him the end.

Anonymous said...

When he saw three full grown elephants coming right at him.He quickly jumpded out of the elephants path.The three elephants wouldn't stop for nothing they all ran through the road nearly missing a car.He quickly ran back to his house and told his dad that three elephants were on the loose.They quickly called police and told them three elephant where on the loose.At first the police didn't belive them but then they got calls from all over the city.So they brought in animal control sqaud and the tranquilize all three elephants and returned them back to the zoo. THE END

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner to his house he stood in shock…Peace out! Anyway, he stood in shock as he saw his mommy was baking apple pie! Gee wilickers! So Pete went inside and got a fork, whipped cream, a huigdhrguyhthuyh, sorry, I meant to say plate, and some cherries. His mom then said,” Pete, I baked some pie!” Then Pete
said,” I’m all over it mom!” So Pete’s Aunt Jill came over and brought a New England pie server and they served the pie. Everybody sat down and ate the Emu, oh; sorry I meant to say apple pie. And everything went well for Pete, but what Pete improved that day, was his pie gorging skills, because he ate about three whole pies. His mom had to make another for them to eat. And to this very day, Pete weighs 469 pounds, and he just started 2nd grade. Know Pete’s mother knows not to EVER bake a pie again.

To be Continued…

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a giant elephant, a guy on a unicycle, 12 clowns In a very small car that only went half way up his shin. He saw tents and carousels and ice cream stands. He was at a carnival. He couldn’t believe his eyes. He called his mom and asked if he could call some friends. She said sure. So he call his friend and they got ice cream went on rides and saw the circus. The last thing they got to do was the ferris wheel. They said that it was the best day ever.

Anonymous said...

a baby kangaroo. "Ahhhhhhhh",said Pete. I love bay kangaroos their so cute,there little pockets are so cool." As Pete ran for the baby kangaroo he named it. He named it Pete Jr. Pete then took it home. When they got home, Pete, gave Pete Jr. a bath. It seemed that Pete Jr. hated water, and the soap. So Pete took him out. Pete then dried Pete Jr. off and they went for a walk to the park. As they walked along the people there just stared at them wondering"A pet kangaroo?" Then Pete Jr. pulled him back headed for the icecream shop. Pete tried pull him back, but he wouldn't. So they went there instead. then Pete jr. put his paws on the counter and said"One scoop of blue moon icecream please?" As Pete heared this he fanted! An hour later......... Pete finally woke up and was in his bed knowing that it was all a dream!

THE END

Anonymous said...

He saw a real live dragon in front of him. Then he took a picture and the dragon spit a fire ball at him. So Pete ran for his life and the dragon came at him clucked his head on a gaigantic rock on the top of the cave. Pete said that wasnt so bad and all of a sudden there was a constant vibrating on the floor. he ran for his life and yelled its an earthqauke and then his mom woke him up and said its time for school now get dressed.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner of his yard he saw a herd of deer was three feet ahead of him. Four does three Bucks and two fawns. One of the bucks stepped foward. Pete amazingly steped foward as weel. He carfully pet the deer. Then they all fled. Pete was terrified when he heard footsteps behind him. Then he realized it was just his dad. He asked (What are you doing?) Pete lied ( Oh just looking at a speacial leaf.) Ok your mom has dinner ready so finish up.replied his dad. So when he turned to go inside he saw the the deer scamper away.

Anonymous said...

....a dirt bike "oh wow" Pete said. He jumped on the bike and rode off. He found a mysterious trail. On the trail he went over a bunch of hills and bumps and just when he thought it was over he hit a huge jump and crashed 75 feet away from the jump. He laid there in pain. About 35 minutes later Pete heard a voice it said "hey dad I found my dirt bike and there is a kid." Pete groaned so they took them to a hospital. The doctor said that Pete had two broken arms and five broken ribs. They called Pete's mom and she came there as fast as she could. Pete later went home with a bunch of casts on in a wheelchair and Pete got in trouble for stealing the dirt bike and Pete never did it again.

Anonymous said...

A flying evil gecko and it started chasing him around the neiborhood and pete looked behind him and it was gone so he quickly ran home to see that the evil gecko tied up his mom with a roll of rope.After he faited he saw at least 16 evil flying gecko's having a party with old person folk music.Then he got out a stick and started pumbling all the geckos into the floor7 then the origonal gecko was standing so he got out his 12 gauge shotgun and killed it.and they all lived happily ever after.THE END.AMEN

Anonymous said...

…A mean Grizzly bear. He turned around and saw a brown bear. So he ran right and saw yet another bear. Only this was a Kodiak brown bear. The only way out was left and there was a polar bear right in front of the door. He was trapped in something he got himself into. HE had decided to go into the strange building. HE wanted to go inside the door, and wouldn’t you know he did. So lucky him is now stuck in someplace he did not know was there. He didn’t know he’d been crying the whole time he was thinking. He got up and looked forward. There was no grizzly. He looked back there was no brown bear. He looked right and saw no Kodiak brown bear. And finally, he looked left and no polar bear. So he ran out of the door and got back to his class.

Anonymous said...

...a huge ghost viking war ship floating silently in the crisp October air. Pete quickly ducked into a wooden crate on the side of the alley that was just big enough for him to sit up in and still be completely hidden.He watched in horror as a gigantic ghost viking came up on deck to scan the horizon.All of a sudden the vikings face went from plain old wonder to pure terror.Pete heard the viking shout something in a forgein language and watched him make wild jestures towards another ghost onboard.Both vikings disapeared below deck and everything was silent.Then out no where,the ship lurched forward and was picking speed.Pete didn't realize until it was too late that he was right in front of the huge ship and was about to be crushed when.......

Anonymous said...

A little toy poodle he walked up to the poodle to pet it, then the poodle revealed very large teeth and bit Pete’s hand. ”Owwww!” Pete Screamed. Then the poodle starting glowing.” That’s what you get!” Yelled Pete. Then the poodle multiplied into 3 poodles. Pete stared in amazement. The poodle kept multiplying until there was 40 poodles. Then Pete fainted. He woke up 5minutes later in pain the poodles were all over his arms and legs biting him. He stood up and shook all the poodles off. He ran down the block to his friend Rolf’s he rang the doorbell about 20 times before Rolf came to the door. “Chill out dude.” Rolf said. “Rolf your never going to believe what just happened!” Yelled Pete. The Poodles and the. Pete fainted yet again. This time Pete woke up about 15 minutes later. “Pete are you ok?” Rolf asked. And what are all the those marks on your arms? “Bite marks from evil poodles.” Pete said. Pete started glowing just like the first poodle did. Pete then mutated into a giant toy poodle. “Pete, Pete are you ok?” Rolf asked. “What happened?” asked Pete. “You Be me $20 dollars you could hold your breath for 4 minutes and passed out!” Yelled Rolf. Oh and by the way you owe me $20!

Anonymous said...

a box with a screaming new born baby inside. Pete did not know what to do!
Pete opened the box and inside there was a note. The note read, please take care of her. She needs a mom. Her name is Angie. Thank you. Pete couldn’t believe that he was looking at an abandoned baby! He quickly picked up the box and ran to get his mom. Oh no! Pete had to go to the bathroom! He dropped the box went to the bathroom fast. When he got back the box was gone and there was no baby! He went on his way to find his mom. When he got there his mom said,” Look I found this baby on the floor by the bathroom!”

Anonymous said...

As Pete rouded the corner he stood in shook As he saw a Rabid squirrel
army with stickes. Pete tries to communicate but they look deadly so as anyone else would to he turned and ran for his life. As he was going out the door he grabbed his bebe gun. All he could do was run for his dads car, he hoped in. He grabbed his cellphone and called the FBI and the army.Pete opened the window a crack. He took his bebe gun and started to shoot. like a mad man. Finally the army came and traquelize the rabbits and took them away to a place to restrain them. THE END!!

Anonymous said...

Heyyyyy Profe my brother reminded me that there was a blog yeahhhh him dont you just love the cutie hes a dear soal i love you profe you are the best

Ik you love me too you dont have to tell me AGAIN

so how the helper doing i forgot ehr name what is it again

love ya

PS DONT TOUCH MY PONY TAIL

haha great times fruit cake!!!!!

Anonymous said...

as he walked past the book store and saw his teacher, Miss Miller. Pete was shocked because he was playing hookey from school. Just then his teacher spotted him. While you didn't know what to do his teacher walked out of the book store. She said, so Pete your home with the flu. Your not going to get out of this one easily. So then on Monday Pete stayed after school and Miss Miller made him write on the chalk board " I will not lie to my Teacher". He had to write it until it filled the entire chalk board, he had to do this five times. On Friday Coleton called Pete before school and said dude I'm thinking of skipping school and going to the arcade do you want to go with me? No! Pete shouted I wanna go to school and then hung up.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a sale for golden retriever puppies. Pete just stared. He was so happy because he always wanted a puppy and a golden retriever would be great. So he went over to see how much they were and if he could afford it. He looked at the price and it was too much for Pete to afford at that time so he asked the owner if he could save one of the puppies for him to pick up next week. So the next week Pete chose one of the puppies and took him home. Now it was time to name the puppy. Her name was Daley. Daley liked her new home and owner and the owner liked Daley so they had a happy life. The End.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw,
his new puppy sally."Wow is she for me?,cool! I cant wait to play with her!Later can we go to the pet store to get some new toys for her?I can tell she really likes to play with stuff.Can I go show her to my friends now?,i'll be at the park if you need me!Hey guys look what my mom and dad got me!Doyou like him?"Ya,we love her shes so cute!I gotta go eat dinner now,BYE

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw that a baby deer had fallen into the pond and was stuck. So the mother deer was trying to find a way to get her baby out. In the mean time Pete just stood in shock with his chin on the ground. He knew if he went to help, the mother deer would run away, but he had no clue if he should help or just wait and watch. About 10 minutes later he worked up the courage to start walking to the deer. As he got closer to them the mother deer left as he was thinking. He went to the baby deer in the pond and started to get all of the seaweed and dirt off the baby deer. When he got all of it off, he helped the baby deer out of the water. Then the mother deer appeared when she saw her baby was safe. The baby deer run to its mother, then the mother deer gave a signal to the baby deer and it followed it. Then the mother deer gave Pete a pat on the arm that meant thank you for saving my baby. The deer always meets Pete by the pond to visit him and Pete always brings food for the mother deer and her lovely baby.

THE END OF PETE AND THE DEER

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