Thursday, September 07, 2006

Complete my thoughts....

Write an ending to the following story starter. Be sure to use 100 words and check your spelling and grammar.

As Sam rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw.....

45 comments:

Anonymous said...

... a monster attacked him. The monster had eight legs four eyes. The monster was purple and green with a few Pokka dots. Sam screamed with top of his lungs ahhhh! help help I am being attacked by a purple and green monster but actually it was a dinosaur. Sam started to run away from the four legged dinosaur but it was to fast. So he hoped over some bushes and fences when he ended up at his neighbor’s house. He thought that he had out smarted the purple and green dinosaur .when all of a sudden BOOM! The dinosaur was standing right in front of him! Then he woke up from a day dream while watching Barnie the purple and green dinosaur.

Anonymous said...

..A big fat Mouse. The mouse was destroying Sam's city. Everyone was running around shouting "a MOUSE EEEK!" like little babies. Sam decided to make the mouse fell unwelcome. First, he had the mousetrap store find the biggest mousetrap they had and he stuck three cans worth of peanut butter on it. Then he put it outside and let the mouse find it. The mouse found it and got it snapped on its mouth and fell instantly and shrunk into an itty bitty mouse. All of a sudden Sam woke up. It was only a dream. When he awoke, he found out it was only his alarm clock set on the scary stories radio station talking about a mouse.

The End

Anonymous said...

...a big evil looking smiley face. It was looking down on him. It said "Sam I am the evil smiley, have come to haunt your town, first I shall destroy the downtown then everyone's houses ha ha ha ha ha!" Sam practically fainted. " What am I going to do I shall save my town somehow! When it started to become dark he decided to head home. When he woke up in the morning he found out it was all a dream. He told his mom about the dream she was amazed. “ Wow that must have been quite a dream.” Said his mom. “ Yes it was, I wish I would have kept sleeping so I could see what happened.” So that’s what happened when Sam rounded the corner.
The end

Anonymous said...

... a huge cookie! "It looks like a ginger snap cookie! Yummy!" Sam screamed as he ran down the street drooling over the huge cookie and saying "Yummy cookie! I want to eat you!" Finally Sam realized he just wasn't fast enough to catch it. He found an old notebook in an alley near by that had a few pages not written on and looked for something to write with. He found an old broken pencil. “Oh well this will have to do!" So he tried to make the most of this broken pencil and old notebook he found. With those objects he drew out his plan. His plan was to put something out that would distract “The Cookie” from looking everywhere for me. So Sam put a trash can out in the middle of the road and filled it with some candy and who knows what Sam could find on the streets? His plan worked great! The cookie went digging in the garbage for something and then Sam took a big bite out of the “The Cookie’s” leg! Now, everyone knows what happens to witches when they get water on them, well, cookies turn into a million little cookies so the whole town got a ton of cookies FOR FREE!
THE END!

Anonymous said...

...a cranky old peddler. "What do you want, young boy?" Sam was so frightened. He didn't want to come to this alley ever again. He sarted to run away, the the odd man grasped him with a boney hand and whispered," Here, take this hat. It will bring you many wonders." Sam started to sprint again, and the old peddler yelled," Goodbye, young chap, goodbye!" Sam placed the hat on his head. Suddenly, everything was black and white. He started to walk forwards and tripped on a sharp rock and fell on it. He pierced his stomach on it. "Ouch!" Sam scrambled up, and everyone was looking at him and laughing, and chanting "Rock boy!" All of a sudden, his pants felt loose, and they fell down, showing off his heart-patterened boxers. Randomly, a flowery dress appeared on him and he looked very girly. Oh, no! This must be a bad luck magic hat! Sam thrust the hat off and kicked it in the dumpster. He ambled away, smiling, and muttering,"Weird old hat . . ."

Anonymous said...

...an old women with a long black cape. She had something in her hand and Sam couldn't tell what it was. Then the old women came up to him and asked, "Would you like some blue gatorade?" So he answered back and he said, "Sure, I guess why not". Then she gave it to Sam and he turned to look the other direction to take a sip and when he turned back around she was gone. Sam said, "Wow that was weird she was rrright hhheere". He started to walk home from school when he started getting sleepy he was walking slower and slower. When he finally got home he said "Mom I'm kind of tired". Sam's mother replied, "Are you feeling o.k.?" "Yeah I'm fine, I'm just going to bed." "O.k. if you get hungry, dinner will be on the table," said his Mom. The next morning Sam's mom asked, "So what happened last night?" "I don't know it was all quite a blur." The End

(The gaderade that the old women gave him was a potion that made him really sleepy)

Anonymous said...

... a giant Pitbull eating a piece of steak. Sam's mouth started watering and without thinking Sam snatched the steak from the dog and took off running down the street. He looked behind him and saw the pitbull gaining on him, he ran faster, jumping over all sorts of obstacles. Then he made a sharp turn down a narrow alley. He leaned against the building braethindg hard. Just when he thought he had lost the rabid dog, he heard a low growl, a shiver went up his spine he slowly turned aroud and saw the Pitbull glaring at him with mean red eyes. Sam closed his eyes and said a quick prayer, ...God please help me, I don't want to die...Amen. When Sam opened his eyes he realized that the Pitbull was gone, so was the steak, but who cares at least I am alive.

Anonymous said...

... David Ortiz, Manny Ramirez and Coco Crisp all seated and eating in the near by diner. Sam was in shock. He ran to the diner and burst opens the doors. He ran to them and fell to the ground with a thud. Manny Ramirez huddled over him and poked at him. Since the baseball players didn't want to be in a huge crowd again they left the diner and went to the Baseball Pro-Shop and started looking around. A few minutes later Sam woke up but was not able to see his favorite people in the world. Sam knew they were gone and started walking home. The next day posted on the local paper was Sam lying on the ground next to Manny Ramirez. That was the greatest day of his life!

Met said...

Three criminals holding SMGs trying to gun down a person, but the bullets just bounced off some kind of forcefield protecting the person, the person drew something that looked like a weapon and fired three beams of continues energy that hit the criminals and made them collapse. Sam was standing there having a mental breakdown when the person walked up to him. He said "well you certainly picked the wrong place to turn the corner". He then tapped some divice on his shoulder, and said aloud "commander, we have a sighter, take these bumbling hobo criminals to the ship, I'll handle the kid". Sam swallowed at the sound of "handle the kid". Then the person turned and Sam was now convinced he was having delusians of a crowded mind when the stranger said "please just don't tell anyone what happend here, heck even if you did they wouldn't believe you, now run along". Sam blindly stubled out of the ally wondering if he was going crazy.

Met said...

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Anonymous said...

…his favorite singer, Jon Bonjovi was singing “Its My Life”. So as he was listening he stated to sing along, “Its my life, its now or never, I ain't going to live forever…” Then everybody jumped out and said, “Surprise, Happy Birthday!” Then, he got to go up by Jon Bonjovi and sing songs non-stop. The part he couldn’t believe is that he was on T.V. When the party was over every body went home except for the singer and his band. They got to stay with Sam for a whole week. His parents said it would be O.K., but they had to sleep in the basement. They had to help around the house. Then, Sam woke up and realized it was all a dream. The song, “Its My Life” ended up just being his alarm clock going off.

Anonymous said...

As Sam rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a little girl crying. She was crying because she lost her puppy Fluffy. Sam said he’d help he look for her dog. Sam first suggested using flyers of her dog to hang around town. The little girl didn’t have a picture of her dog. Sam then suggested going to the Humane Society to see if he dog Fluffy was there. The little girl cried even hardier than before. She was afraid her dog wouldn’t be there. Finally, they decided to walk around a few blocks to see if they could find Fluffy. As they walked they saw other dogs and a few cats but no Fluffy. They decided to go down one more block. Suddenly bounding out of the shadows, a very large dog which must have weighed a hundred pounds came charging down the street straight at them. Could this be Fluffy? Just as the dog was about to jump Sam woke up he was at school in the middle of a history class. The teacher was asking him who the first president was. He said Fluffy.

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

an alligator right in front of him, with 2 bulky eyes as big as CDs. The tail of the alligator was 10 feet long and was 1 foot thick. It looked like a real alligator, but it could not be a real alligator, because where he lives there is barely any water for 100 miles. An alligator in Ohio, it could not be. As he slowly turned around and started to run, he saw the alligator did not move. So he went closer to it, but it still did not move. He touched it and it felt like a bush. He suddenly realized he was in Mr. Larson’s yard.

Anonymous said...

he saw Darth Vader standing right in front of him with a lightsaber. Sam knew that it probably not a good thing to be standing next to a villan that has killed millions of people in Star Wars. So Sam ran back to his house but Darth Vader kept popping up next to him. Sam was so confused that he fainted. when he woke up The ending credits of Star Wars was on the T.V screen.

Anonymous said...

...He saw Darth Vader towering right over him holding a lightsaber. Sam knew about Darth Vader because he watched a bunch of Star Wars movies.Sam knew it wasn't a good idea to be standing next to a villan that has killed a bunch of people in Star Wars.So Sam sprinted back to his house but Darth Vader was there too. So he ran to the Bay City Police Station but they thought Sam was crazy. When he walked out of the police station Sam saw Darth Vader again. Sam ran back to his house but it was to late Darth Vader was again standing right in front of him. Sam got so scared he fainted. When Sam woke up he saw the ending credits to the movie Star Wars on his televsion.

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Anonymous said...

....a big green and purple monster. It was very hairy. First, I just stood there because I was very scared. Then after I gained control, I ran away. I was so scared. I thought I lost him, but I was filling balloons in my backyard and he showed up there. Soon everywhere I went I saw him. I saw him when I was walking to school, at my neighbor's house and while I was playing hockey. I finally realized had to do something. I told him to take his mask off. I couldn't make out his face of anyone I new. I was trying hard to see who it was but then I woke up. It was only a dream.

Anonymous said...

…Chocolate galore! It was a chocolate road. There were chocolate trees, chocolate buildings, chocolate animals, grass, anything you could imagine! It was all chocolate. White chocolate, dark chocolate, milk chocolate. Sprinkles, jimmies, nuts, all on the chocolate. There were even chocolate statues of people. Everything (everything!) was chocolate! Sam was in heaven! He loved chocolate, any kind of chocolate! First he went straight for a chocolate flower, then to a chocolate bird, sitting in a tree. Then to something bigger, a chocolate car! He was getting a teensy bit full. Then, he went to something gigantic…A TREE! He still wanted more. Soon, he was full. He ate about half everything. Then he looked at his watch: 6:15!!! His mom was expecting him home in 15 minutes! For dinner! And he had eaten chocolate before and is stuffed now!
When Sam arrived home, Sam’s mom was upset. He got home at 6:45 and said he was full. His mother gave him a tiny bit of everything the rest of his family was eating, but he wouldn’t eat it. He was just to full. So he was sent to bed to go to sleep early with no normal food for dinner.

Anonymous said...

Big Harry monster sitting on a bench and was reading the news paper. When he was done reading the news paper you could tell because he was eating the news paper! He missed the news paper at first but he got over it and then began to sing and sing it was a pretty good tune but it got a little old and annoying. Now this is what I can’t believe he was eating garbage from the garbage can now let me tell you this was getting grouse. When he was about half way done he pulled out a banana peel and threw it at my head as if my head were a target. Then in a blink of a eye he disappeared. In to the sky!

Anonymous said...

... A huge giant, it looked ferocious he had yellow pointy teeth, a big pointy nose a huge fat belly, a ripped shirt and ripped pants. Sam gasped with shock then he screamed and ran, the giant started running after him Sam couldn’t believe it was too weird to be real. he ran over to the house and jumped over their fence and through the bushes the giant was still flowing him so then he ran even faster hoping the giant would get tired and stop then the giant yelled "wake up its only a dream!" but Sam thought it cant be a dream I was just walking home from school! Then he really did wake up and it was all a dream. "Sam its time for school wake up honey" said Sam's mom so Sam got up and went to school hoping their was no giant.

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

As Sam ronded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a wolf standing in the middle of the hall way while drooling.He stared into my eyes and all of a sudden he started to run after me and bit my shirt and riped it off. I was running so fast I didn't even see the Math book in the middle of the hall and tripped and fell. I looked ahead and saw the restroom and thoughtI could run to the door, but the wolf ran in front of me and he was gaurding the door. In a blink of an eye,an arrow flew over my head and hit the wolf right in the stomach and it turned out it was Jim Carey my hero.

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

Miss Miller,
I think you made a mistake for Homework for Religion. Memory 8&9 is for Thursday??????????????

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

...A very big cookie. It was floating
three feet off the ground. It was a chocolate chip cookie. Then Sam started to eat the cookie. He got so full he could not walk. Then all of a sudden he started to float. He was so excited that he could float. Then he stared to float with the birds. Then he accidentally floated into a thunder storm. Then he got to close to a thunder clould and got hit by lightning. The zap made the cookie digest faster and he started to fall to the ground.He broke through the roof and landed in his bed. Next time he will have a heavy shake.

Anonymous said...

... a snowman staring right at him. He thought,"That was a close one!"

Anonymous said...

... a giant bulldog was staring right at him. It started to growl and bark. Its blood shot eyes still staring at me it jumped, I jumped to the side to avoid his giant paws. I started running down the street, the bulldog started chasing me then I quickly jumped into a near by alley. But the bulldog kept running I sit down on a trash bag that smelled really bad. After catching my breath I looked outside the ally and then the bulldog saw me it darted towards me I run to the back of the alley I come to a dead end. And there was the giant bulldog gazing at me as if I where a choice cut. The bulldog started to close in on me. Just when I thought it was all over an old woman came up behind the bulldog and said, "There you are Buttercup". I thought Buttercup what kind of name is that then the lady hooks the dog on a leash and drags the humungous dog away.

Anonymous said...

...an odd looking figure that was orange and was wearing silver clothes. When Sam said "Hi" the creature did not respond. Instead it lifted up its hand and brought it down very fast like an army person. When Sam tried to talk to the figure it never responded. Sam thought that the figure moved like a robot. Sam still was not sure what it was or what it was doing here. Sam just kept on walking, minding his own business. When Sam got home he noticed that the orange thing followed him home. It rang the doorbell. Petrified Sam answered the door. The orange thing started taking off its own head. Then Sam heard the sound of his sister's voice. It sounded like she was saying "Hurry, or you're going to miss my play." So Sam went to his sister's play and had a blast.

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

... He saw a prairie dog with an ak-47 and said I’ll give you 10 second to run. Sam ran a fast as he when he saw a 4wheeler so he toke it. He was going at least 30 mph when his back tires pop, he saw the prairie dog it was on a dirt bike shoot this time he had a Uzi. Then, he realized he had an air soft gun in his bag. He returned fire and the prairie dog vanished into thin air .then the 4 wheeler. He heard his mom saying wake up Sam wake up. He opened his eyes it was all a dream. The end

Anonymous said...

...a floating gun! It pointed right at him and shot. Sam ducked and ran for his life! Suddenly a skeleton jumped out and said that if he moved a muscle he would be skewered. Sam felt a gleaming knife at his throat. He was freaked out! Sam suddenly felt a stab in the back. He waited to be dead, but the skeleton said,”Wake up Sam." Sam thought,”Why would a skeleton say that?" He turned around and saw Zach poking him in the back of the head with a pencil. He said,”Sam, stop falling asleep in class."

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

sorry miss miller. i only have 96 words in my story. i am rewriting it below.

Anonymous said...

...a floating gun! It pointed right at him and shot. Sam ducked and ran for his life! Suddenly a skeleton jumped out and said that if he moved a muscle he would be skewered. Sam felt a gleaming knife at his throat. He was freaked out! Sam suddenly felt a stab in the back. He waited to be dead, but the skeleton said,”Wake up Sam." Sam thought,”Why would a skeleton say that?" He turned around and saw Zach poking him in the back of the head with a pencil. He said,”Sam, stop falling asleep in class." Sam said,”OK.”

Anonymous said...

whoops, that was 99 words

Anonymous said...

...a floating gun! It pointed right at him and shot. Sam ducked and ran for his life! Suddenly a skeleton jumped out and said that if he moved a muscle he would be skewered. Sam felt a gleaming knife at his throat. He was freaked out! Sam suddenly felt a stab in the back. He waited to be dead, but the skeleton said,”Wake up Sam." Sam thought,”Why would a skeleton say that?" He turned around and saw Zach poking him in the back of the head with a pencil. He said,”Sam, stop falling asleep in class." Sam said to Zach,”OK.”

Anonymous said...

... I saw a a big cuddly teddy bear that had a big tommy gun in his hand and was wearing baggy shorts. Apparently he was in a gang. Now I could not leave a dangerous person like him on the loose. He could kill some one. So I fought back. He started shooting his Tommy gun and nearly hit me so I jummped off the wall and dodged the bullets. Then I made my move. I did a super cool double flip and knoked the gun out of his hands, then punched him in the face and before he could move I kicked him in the stomach. I don't know what happend but he just fell over and started breathing very hard and coughing. I called the police and they arrested him.

Anonymous said...

...A man with a RPG in his left hand. Then the man pulled out a 107 barrette. Sam ran for his life. He found a doge viper Sam got in and dove away. Then the person who tries to get him jumped in a super charged corvette that goes 250. So he caught up to Sam. Sam had pulled out a pistol and shot out the tiers the man came to a stop. Next the person who was chasing Sam shot out his tiers with a sniper rifle. Now it became a showdown quickly Sam pullout an automatic nine millimeters sub machine gun. They shot each other and died. The End

Met said...

I thought the guy was far away if he used a sniper rifle to take out his tires, I highly doubt a 9mm SMG could hit at that range.

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