Friday, March 03, 2006

Complete this Story #2


As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a _________ and knew........

41 comments:

Anonymous said...

SWEET! I AM FIRST!

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a man, breathing very deeply and slowly and knew someone was watching me. I could feel my spine chill all the way up my back. It scared me out of my pants. I didn’t even turn around, I just started a full out sprint. The camera I was taking pictures with was holding me down. I could hear footsteps behind me. I think he was gaining on me. I didn’t have any water, and I knew I couldn’t last much longer. I was so scared. Than I realized I had set my backpack down while I was taking pictures. It had my cell phone and food and water. I had to go back and get it. I thought I could try to turn the guy around with me so that he still wouldn’t get me, but I knew with what energy I had left I wouldn’t be able to run that fast with it still any ways. So I just forgot about it. I could always go back to get it later. I didn’t want to venture off to far so I took a wide turn, not letting them gain any speed, or letting them catch up to me. I began to run back, but I knew I was starting to slow down; I never was a very good runner anyways. The guy chasing me couldn’t have much energy ether. I tried to do more to make him trip or something. I went through tall grassy areas, and jumped of rocks after rocks. All of the sudden I heard a guy yell as he fell to the ground. I looked back. He couldn’t get up, and he was screaming and yelling at the top of his lunges. I was happy, now I could start to walk. The only problem is that I am way out of my way, and I don’t think I will be able to find my way back. The sun was beginning to go down, and it was starting to cool down. I still didn’t have any water though, and I think soon I will dehydrate. I was really tired so I found a spot under a tree to lay down a sleep. As I began to drift off, I heard thunder a lightning. All of the sudden it began to down pour. Just as I thought nothing worse could happen the wind began to blow and the thunder and lightning were getting worse. I couldn’t stay under the tree, because I knew it was the most dangerous place to be right now. I didn’t know where to go. Not being familiar with the place I didn’t know where to go, not including the fact that it was in the middle of no where. I began to just wander. I must have gone the wrong way trying to find my bag. Not that it would do any use any more. I just knew something bad was going to happen. I finally found a ditch type thing in the ground. I laid down to rest. I fell in to a deep sleep, from every thing that went on during the day. When I awoke, the sun was beating down on me not giving up even to take. I was still a little damp from last night’s storm, but my mind was quickly distracted to the fact that I was really hungry. I had not eaten since breakfast the day before. All of the sudden in the distance I saw what looked like my backpack. I walked over to it. It was my back pack. I jumped up and down but when I opened my back pack everything was ruined. I took out my cell phone, but when I tried to get through it disconnected. I tried to text a message, and it made it through. Hours later I saw a green jeep coming my way. I started to run towards it waving my hands. The person driving the car pulled over. I told them what happened and asked them if they had a phone. They said I was in luck, they almost forgot it at home, but it remembered it just as they were pulling out. I called my brother who I was staying with and told him I was all right. He came to pick me up and I told him everything that happened. He was just glad I was alright. On our drive home we saw the same guy that was chasing me. He had been struck by lightning and was dead. I got home and ate like a horse. Later that week I went home witch is where I am now, and I will never for get that trip for as long as I live.




The End




804 words! I didn’t think it was that long I was just so engaged in my writing. Miss Miller I like these finish the story ones.

Anonymous said...

tht wasnt me that said i was first by the way.

Anonymous said...

Jeff told me to say he is cool,
so...

Jeff is Cool!

Anonymous said...

GOOOOOOO NOAAAH!!!!!!!!!! I didn't think you were actually going to do it.

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a cougar and knew I was in trouble. I turned around to see the giant cat breathing heavily in my face. I started to walk backwards very slowly, which started to a jog, and then a sprint. I turned around and started to run as fast as he possibly could. I turned into a forest, and slipped into the thick pad of bushes. I panted, and laid down. I could hear the cougar tip-toeing into the forest. I hid myself more, but just caused a rustle, and the cougar turned his head toward me. I angrily started at the cougar, which was pretty dumb. I was tired of the stupid black cougar stalking him throughout the forest. The cougar manhandled me, tossed me to the ground and ripped up my clothes and neck. As I passed out, I could see a park-ranger shoot the cougar with a tranquilizer gun. Then everything went black.

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of drums and singing and knew there must be a party at the local village. I decided I should go, so I grabbed my backpack and set out for the village. It turned out they were having a religious ceremony, so I quietly snuck in and sat down to watch. Suddenly I saw a little kid staring at me and screaming, "Intruder!" I got up and tried to run, but soon figured out there was no way out. The village people grabbed me and tied me to a pole. Then they took my cell phone out of my backpack and started prank calling people. Next, they decided to ceremonially burn my belongings. All of a sudden everything was quiet. A lone drum was playing. Boom! Boom! Boom! All the villagers began chanting and I was untied and put in a pit. I heard a noise and whirled around to see a lion advancing towards me, his teeth glinting menacingly. I picked up a nearby stick and threw it at the lion. The stick bounced of the lion and it surged forward. I tried to dodge it but it pounced on me. I could see his evil yellow eyes and smell his bad breath. Someone screamed and the lion looked away. In the split second it was distracted, I pushed the lion off of me. I ran and jumped the wall of the pit. The lion followed. I kept on running until I could run no more. I turned around and I saw no lion. I could see a speck in the distance that looked like a man. He had something in his hand and as I realized it was a bow, an arrow pierced my heart and I feel to the ground, dead.

Anonymous said...

GO WILDCATS!

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a elephant and knew that I was in trouble. I didn't know what to expect because elephants are sooooooo big and I was by myself! I was getting very scared so I started to run and run! Finally I got to the edge of the Desert and I was into the city. The elephants were gone but I could still see them in the distance. I was hoping that the elephants weren't going to follow me all they what into the city. Well I walked home and about a half hour later I heard my neighbors screaming and I looked outside and there was the elephants standing next to Wal-Mart!! What was going to happen now? Well one of my friends from school called the cops and then the cops called the animal place and they came to capture all of the elephants back into the savanna. That is my story about what I saw in the Savanna!!

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a elephant and knew that I was in trouble. I didn't know what to expect because elephants are sooooooo big and I was by myself! I was getting very scared so I started to run and run! Finally I got to the edge of the Desert and I was into the city. The elephants were gone but I could still see them in the distance. I was hoping that the elephants weren't going to follow me all they what into the city. Well I walked home and about a half hour later I heard my neighbors screaming and I looked outside and there was the elephants standing next to Wal-Mart!! What was going to happen now? Well one of my friends from school called the cops and then the cops called the animal place and they came to capture all of the elephants back into the savanna. That is my story about what I saw in the Savanna!!

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African Savanna I heard the unmistakable sound of native tribes chasing me. They had spears bows and clubs. I knew right then and there I would have to run about 50 feet to my jeep and start driving like a mad man. I quick started yelling to my scout Gabala to grab his gun and run to the jeep. So we got to the jeep and suddenly arrows are flying at and over our heads. I quick grabbed my radio and called to our camp to warn them to grab their weapons and meet us at the abandon village. After about two hours of driving like maniacs we met them at the village. All of our men were there. Then one the men asked me what are going to do. Gabala and I came up with a plan we would abandon the village and hide in the mountains there we would wait for them.
The next day I looked into my binoculars and I saw about 200 natives coming at us. I quick yelled for my men to hide up here and grab their guns. Their leader was riding a camel; I could see that he had like headdress on. I told the men to fire and then the natives ran away.


The End

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a lion and knew some creature was in danger. It had been chasing an antelope. It roared every twenty steps. The antelope was terrified. After the chase, the lion was the one eating. Although the lion had a giant meal, he was still hungry. All of a sudden it looked at me. It was ready to pounce. I was screaming when it ran toward me. I then knew what I had to do. I had to get my gun. By the time I got my gun, the lion was within 10 yards of me. Now, I could only hop into my jeep. When I kicked it into high gear, the lion had just barely clawed the car. The lion was now chasing me. Now was my opportunity to shoot the lion or at least wound him. The first shot missed, and so did the second bullet. Finally, on my third try, I hit the lion in the leg, wounding him. He was still trying to catch me, but after a while the lion stopped, and I couldn’t believe it. The lion fell to the ground and was dead, because there was an infection in his front left leg. That is how I stopped the lion. I didn’t want the lion to die, I just wanted the lion to be wounded. The End

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a triple horned rhinelefish blazing by. I ran behind a tree and turned into...drum roll please...BLUE LIGHTNING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Faster than a speeding lightning bolt! Stronger than the biggest rain cloud, and able to shock people so badly they fall to the ground paralyzed (his weakest attack). He stood face to face with the triple horned rhinelefish. He drew his lightning sword and thunder shield. "Prepare to be paralyzed for approximately 567,483,765,783,765,738.02987859328678298764839294877 years!(almost like an hour for a triple horned rhinelefish) All three of the triple horned rhinelefish horns began to glow, one red, one blue, and the other yellow. Out of the blue one came a 5,000,000,000,000 mph water stream, out of the red one came 555,555,555,555,555,555.999999 degrees F of lava, out of the yellow one came a enormous(more like a spark compare to BLUE LIGHTNING's attacks)Lightning bolt! BLUE LIGHTNING put up his force field. But, the creature dodged it as it deflected off of the force field. BLUE LIGHTNING watched as a tree sizzled to the ground. BLUE LIGHTNING started a thunder storm and charged his triple thunder sonic boom lightning attack and unleashed! The sound was SOOOOOO loud it made the creature run away back to his own dimension. BLUE LIGHTNING's End

Anonymous said...

YAY!!! THE BOYS WON!!!!! 46-45!!! BOOYA! they're in the state championship game now!!

29-0!! YA THATS WHAT I'm TALKIN ABOUT!!!

come cheer them on tomorrow (Sunday)

5:30 @ concordia univerity!
GO WILDCATS!

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the sound of a school bell. It turned out that I had never been to Africa, but I wanted to go. I left my parents a note, don't worry i'll be back soon and if I get eaten by a cute lion... well at least I can pet the cute lion.

So one day as I, Emily Susan Plumeau was in the Savanna I saw a huge (and tall) girraffe. It let me have a ride on it's head s that I could see. (What I can dream can't I?) Yes... So as I was saying, I rode on it's head and when it let me off I could see the African tribe of Oogla. They were all so different from us... I mean one even had green skin. (I think he was sick.) So this other guy had a log for an earing and don't ask me how he got it in there! The tribe had monkeys and lions for pets. I was given my own cub and I named it Sandy. Sandy helped me get food and kill the odd African people. (That's why nobody knows about them.) When I turned 20 I went home and went to sleep. When I woke up the next morning my parents said that I was never gone! (What's there problem, I was gone for years.) Oh well, I think they got to old to keep track of me anyway. They must have lost it awhile ago... They never knew it was me who broke the vase. Too bad, my brother will get over it, he's only got another 2 months of being grounded. THE END

Anonymous said...

..... the zebras galloping as the lions were roaring all around them. The zebras looked like they were going to jump ten feet in the air, because they were panicing so bad. I wanted to see what would happen to the zebras so I followed them. It turns out that the zebras got free and the lions came after me so I high tailed it to the safty resurve and locked the doors.( they were bolet proof, and five inches thick.)Hours later when me and my friend were still waiting there so we wanted to see if the lions were still out side and they were. So we decided to waight a day or so before we went back out. We threw out a pice of meat because the lions were still there. THEY DEVOURED IT AS IF IT WERE THE ONLY THING THEY EVER ATE IN THEIR LIFE. When sixty-three days passed they finaly left.( We fed the lions seven bouckets of meat every seven hours.) I finally left for home, and no one believed me. (I was just in my back yard for two hours playing with my cousin)

Anonymous said...

I surveyed the African Savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a . . . lion roaring loud and proud. He looked at me and gave 1 really big roar and a pack of wild man eating lions. They all were roaring at the top of their lungs really loud and I knew just what they were about to do, they were going to attack me! I was scared I did not know what to do in these kinds of situations! They looked like it was feeding time, but I don't want to get eaten! So what I did is got into my truck and went as fast as the truck would let me go, but in the end I made it out of the situation alive! Thank you God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

beverly hills thats where i want to be thats right im listening on that with my IPOD WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

Anonymous said...

I was taking pictures as i surveyed rhe african savanna,I heard this weird scream i did know what it was but i knew something was wrong i walked around looking for the mystrious sound.I saw two human like things fighting i quickly ran and hid behind the rock.I peeked out and i watched then i wanted to get closer.I moved then i broke a stick with my feet on accedent and i stoped............Then they heard me and screamed the terrible scream.I ran to hide behind the tree i waited for a few seconds then looked i saw nothing.Then i pant in relief. Then i saw suliva hanging down i looked up it was the human like thing it had peircing red eyes blue skin green teeth and yellow hair it was hideauos. Then i ran i looked bacl it wasnt there than it came from the sky and it rumbled the ground like and earth queake. Then i said to my self if i die might as well do one of the things i love i opend my back pack and took a picture and it screamed again i thought yes i blinded him so i took a nother picture and ran he soon finnally could see but he couldnt evan jump that far or run that fast to catch then he picked up a huge rock and chucked it then it hit me and thats why i am telling this story from the emergency room.

Anonymous said...

P.S. the ipod thing wasnt me

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakeable sound of a lion and knew that my friends and I better leave before we were his prey for lunch.My friends were over by a tree taking pictures,so they didn't hear the lion growl and they didn`t know why I was saying that we had to leave now. I said to them that I had just heard a big, scary lion growl. they just stood there and stared at me and said,"Madalyn,there is no lion out here.First of all we didn't even hear a growl.And second of all it is the lion's mating season.When it is the lion's mating season they travel north and we are in the southern most part of Africa.This is why we came at this time of year. There is no possible way there can be a lion here.I said ," Come on you guys I'm serious.Why don't you believe me? Weall are going to die if we don't leave now!He is getting closer."
"Whatever. you can leave if you want,but I am getting some really good snapshots for the brosure I'm making." she said.
"Fine,I will."
So I left in my Jeep and went back to the hotel.The next day I heard about three teenager that had been attacked by a lion and they all died.I had a horrible feeling in my stomache because I knew that it was my friends.

The End

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of an elephant tearing towards Nick and I. He had his tusks ready to take us out. We stood our ground with our guns ready. Then, we fired. One shot to the leg and one to the head. We got him. At that moment we thought we were fine, but that was the leader of a pack. We heard stomping coming towards us. Then over the hill came 20 elephants ready to get us. I radioed back to Tony in the city. I told him we were in trouble. By then te elephants were near. We got on our ATV's and we started North away fron the elephants. Right ahead of us a helicopter came out of the sky and Tony popped out. We drove our ATV's onto the helicopter and got going. We flew to the nearest town and we were saved.

The End!

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna,I heard the unmistakable sound of a lion prowling toward me.I didnt want to move but i knew i had to. I ran and behind me i could hear the lion chaseing after me.I ran and hid in a large patch of grass.He could smell me,i had to smell like something else.But what?So i layed and rolled in the mud till i was covered.I heard the lion walking ,but i couldnt tell were.I had to move to the nearest tree.I started to roll and crawl,if i stay low it wont see me.I crawled and ran into something and i looked up and it was a person.I told them that there was a Lion around this area.There tribe took me in gave me new cloths and gave me things to eat.I stayed there for awhile and i said i had to get back to my camp.They quickly asked well than why were you on your own in the savanna without any weapons?I said that my group left me at the sight and i wanted to find them.Which i didnt.They then told me to stay the night because it was to dark to go out.I stayed and The next morning they took me back.
The end

Anonymous said...

Uh how should I begin oh yah? As I surveyed the African savanna, I herd the most unmistakable sound of a rampage of all sorts of animals. There were kangaroos, monkeys, zebras and I knew what to do. RUN!! But as I ran for my life I noticed a large pack of hyenas on the side. I would have stop there plan. But I thought of my life, I mean millions upon millions are running right behind me. Oh believe me I tried but I got hit three times trying eventual I thought. Why not just go around I don’t now why I didn’t think of that sooner. So I did but wasn’t happy about it. So here I am being chased by hyenas

Anonymous said...

THIS IS A FICTIONAL STORY! MATRIX LIKE STUNTS THAT I PRE FORM ARE NOT POSSIBLE AND I NEVER DID THEM!
As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the sound of wildebeest running as fast as his jumbo legs could carry him. I turned around and saw: (Please start playing Beethoven’s fifth music in the background.) a stampede! I said to my brother who snuck on the plane to see “wild animals.” “Shall we run for our lives?” He replied,”Oh yes lets.” “YYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!” we yelled in unison. We kept on running. I thought, “What the heck caused this?” Sooner then I thought, my question was answered. A pack of lions was breathing down the wildebeest’s backs. I told my brother to do what I do. I jumped up and grabbed a tree branch. I swung up and landed on top of the branch. I told my brother to stay in the tree. I grabbed A thick stick off the tree and jumped down. The lions all jumped at me. I flipped through the air and beat the stuffing out of the lions. The wildebeests where saved.
THE END.

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a phaser and knew that we had been found out. I turned around and saw three unmistakable humanoids clad in black. I fired a rapid burst of gravimetric microtorps and ran. Phil and I found the same shelter, a hollowed out rotted log. Phil and I stared at the sight ahead, the power generator, our goal. We had to disable it so the N.R.R.S. Firestorm-B could begin the disabling sequence using a deflector pulse to shut down the main core. Reg found cover at the same place, along with Ensign Torres. Reg explained that ensign Torres had set up a maze of gravimetric mines. We had to get out and take our chances with the Firestorm. As we matierlized on the bridge Lutenant Josh Wright explained that we had 3 warships on the way. Reg sent a call to Alpha base 1 for reinforcements. We hoped Captain Gemtine didn’t already have his hands full.

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Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heared the unmistakeable sound of ...of giant foot steps behind me. I turned around and I saw a huge eleaphant. It picked me up and but me on its back. I rode along on the eleaphants back and saw many differant things. I saw a zebra and a girffe and also many lins. I was getting tired so the eleaphant put me in a treeand I slept there.In the moring when I woke up I saw the eleaphant sitting by me.The eleaphant took me on anoughter adventure. Now I think I'm going to staay in Africa with my best firend forever.

Anonymous said...

As i surveyed theAfrican Savanna I heard the unmistakable sound of a Giraffe and knew that she was whanting for a owner. So I got off the tourer bus and hopped on the giraffe and we road off into the sun set. Then the next day we hit a thunder storm! It was the most horible thunder storm I had ever seen. We whent into a safe spot and then right there in front of us there was a gue that killes African animals we tried to run as fast as we could but we couldnt stop him. He through a arrow and hit her. Then she fell over I tried to save her life but then he shot her and she died. I cried for 10 days straight and didnt eat. Then I passed away.

THE END!!!
JENNIFER S.

Anonymous said...

As serveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a gaint halve mutated halve robot lion with red eyes and fire breathing ability pierce the air and knew that I needed the help from the M.T.F.U.T.R.E. (Monkey Task Force Unit That Rides Elephants). So I picked up the bannana phone and pushed the speed dial button to get the M.T.F.U.T.R.E.. Then suddenly they put me on hold. I then knew that it was time to write my will. The problem was I did not have a piece of paper. Suddenly, a hand gave me a piece of paper so I said "Thank you Mr. giant halve mutated halve robot lion that has red eyes and fire breathing ability." Then the bannana phone rung. I picked up the phone and it was the M.T.F.U.T.R.E.! I was so happy that I started to dance with the lion thing. I then said to the lion "I have to go now because I have to eat dinner!" That set of the beast. The lion chased me into its den with his family. I found out that the lion thing wanted me to have dinner with him. I said, "Okay." After dinner the M.T.F.U.T.R.E. arived and took me home.










END

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna,I heard the unmistakable sound of rippling water,and knew I would survive.Maybe.Knowing tomorrow I would only have my flare gun,water,and a small outline of shade.It was quickly getting dark and quiet.I fell asleep in the dim shine of the moon.Chirp Cheep.I was awakened by small birds drinking from the water whole.As I lifted my head I saw other objects,but much larger.Elephants,zebras,rhinos all crowding around the water whole waiting for their turn to get water.As I awoke feeling sick and dehydrated I took a sip of water.As I slowly got up I noticed all the animals leaving in large groups.I turned around and saw three very hungry lions spreading out trapping me at the edge of the water.There was only one thing to do.I jumped into the water swimming with all my might.I looked back,and surprisingly the lions weren’t following me.What was that I asked my self as I drifted along the water.Up ahead I saw two anxious eyes slightly above the water.Oh-no I said out loud.A crock was swimming towards me.As I struggled to swim I grabbed my flare gun,but I dropped it.As the crock crept closer I felt something sharp.A pointed piece of broken wood.I swung up the wood and stabbed the crock in the roof of its mouth.A pool of blood splashed up to the surface of the water.I pulled myself onto the shore exhausted.I wandered off into the distance not knowing where I was going.I fiercely dropped to the ground when I fainted,because I was so exhausted.As I awoke the next morning I knew I had to make a signal.The flare gun!I had to go back and get it.I wasn’t that far from the water whole so I walked back slowly saving my energy to swim.When I got there I saw the dead body of the crock on the shore.So I dived in water and swam to the area where I dropped my gun.I shoved myself down into the filthy water.I felt something hard hit my hand so I grabbed it.It was very heavy.As I got to the surface I saw it was a block of gold.I was rich,but that wasn’t important.I went down again,and found my gun.I got out of the water and fired the flare gun.It went high so someone had to see it.An hour later I saw a truck in the afternoon heat.I was picked up and got posted on the front page of every news paper in the world.It told my story,and I was happy sitting in my mansion in Memphis.I thought to myself how many more mansions I could buy if I went back and got more of that gold.

Anonymous said...

as i survived the african savanna,i heard the unmistakable sound of crabby girl. "where can i find the nearest bathroom with the closest outlet and mirror to blow dry my hair, put on my make-up, and curl my gorgous hair?" i did not know what to say. she was just all freaked out that she absolutly had to find a bathroom! she was driving me insane! her hair was long and blond and let me tell you, she was absessed with herself. don't even get me started on her mom! the only problem was is that they were both blonds! that is when the nighmare bigins! wish me luck!



THE END

Anonymous said...

As I survived the african savanna,I heard the unmistakable sound of crabby girl. "Where can I find the nearest bathroom with the closest outlet and mirror to blow dry my hair, put on my make-up, and curl my gorgous hair?" I did not know what to say. She was just all freaked out that she absolutly had to find a bathroom! She was driving me insane! Her hair was long and blond and let me tell you, she was absessed with herself. Don't even get me started on her mom! The only problem was is that they were both blonds! That is when the nighmare begins! Wish me luck!

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a space ship and knew it wasn’t a dream. Large creatures with blue faces and long tails were invading the earth. To my surprise I found out that they were creatures called zonks. I was a little scared at first and I stood in my hiding spot which was behind a rock. Soon they walked away from their ship. When I was sure that they were gone I snuck aboard their ship. It was full of all sorts of things that looked like they would hurt to touch. I kept walking till a reached a room that seemed to be were that aliens drove the ship. I thought it was about time to leave. I was just about to turn around when I heard a loud grunt behind me. I was too scared to even move in inch. Suddenly a large pair of arms tightened around me. Then I was carried to a small prison like room and thrown in. The door was slammed shut. I was trapped!
A while later I felt the ships engine start. I felt the ship slowly rise into the air. I was more nervous then I had ever felt before in my life. “What to do?” I thought to my self. At that moment the door creaked open. An alien walked in with a small container. It took off the lid of the container. Green smoke started to rise from it. The rest I saw was very frightening. Everything morphed together to from my greatest nightmare. A giant spider!
Then I fainted.
I woke up in a different place. This time I was in a solid gold cage. I looked around the outside. Right in front of me was the largest of all the aliens. He was sitting in a tall throne made of silver. Diamonds, rubies, safaris, and a few other jewels I could not identify lined all sides of the throne. On the top of his head sat a crown made of gold. In his hand he held a staff. He was staring straight at me. Two aliens entered the room and got to their knees and bowed. The king nodded his head and the two aliens lifted the cage with me inside. They carried me down many corridors all lined with pictures of their king. Then we reached a candle lit room. That’s were I was placed. A low humming started behind me. Drums beat all around me. A sweet flute blew from somewhere above me. Flames suddenly burst out in front of me. Then I found out that I was going to be sacrificed to their god snicklehimmer. The king gave a hideous laugh.
They were pulling me out of the cage. I gave a horrible scream. The seemed to hate the noise of screaming. They let go of me to cover their ears. I ran as fast as my legs could go. I had no idea were I was going or what to do but I kept running. To my luck I soon reached a room were they kept their space ships! I ran up the stairs on the nearest ship. I ran back to the control room of the ship. I pushed the first button I saw. It closed the back of the ship. Then I pushed a few more buttons the ship rose into the air. Then a small voice said to me “can I help you”? I turned around to see another alien. She looked about my age. I knew from the start that I could trust her.
I explained everything and she said that she to was going to escape to. We both wanted to go to Africa. She knew how to get there and she also knew how to fly the ship. Soon not worrying about much I drifted off into a deep sleep. I was woken up by a sudden jolt.
We had landed in the savannas of Africa. The door of the ship was opened. I thanked the girl. She said that she could change her ship invisible. She told me that whoever had been on the inside of the ship would continue to be able to see the ship even when it was invisible. She would live in the savanna if I brought food and supplies and promised to come over a lot. I agreed. Now every day I come to visit her and her ship.

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Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African Savana, I heard the unmistakable sound of a elaphant in danger of some lions. So I ran over to see what I could do. The lions were serounding it with no mom in sight let alone anyother elephants to protect him. I knew I had to do something to help the poor thing. I relised I had my cell phone and had a song that would annoy anyone. So I wiped it out and yelled, " Hay lions over hear!!!" They looked and I played the song and before I knew it they ran away. After I made sher that they were gone. Thought to myself Now what was I going to do with an elephant. He probible would not fit in my bedroom. So until it was time for my moms plane to land I took action. I took it to a watering hole. Bathed it and cleaned it and fed it then I named it Zoose. My mom sayed that we could keep him in my back yard.

Anonymous said...

I heard the unmistakable sound of a 20-limbed-one-legged-snailoid-nano-dragon and knew I was drawing close to the main hive. As soon as a related yet harmless 3-limbed-one-legged-nano-snailoid-nano-dragon flew past me I knew I could wait no longer. I activated the protective power of the GRIMLOATHE STAFF to protect me from the nano-dragons power. As I drew near the nano-dragons all became aware of me. The harmless 3-limbed-one-legged-snailoid-nano-drgons fled through the swamp, some being eaten by African-Carnivorous-ultra-gorefrogs. The 20-limbed-1-legged-sailoid-nano-dragons began to attack. The air around me was soon filled with electricity. I knew that THE STAFF would soon be exhausted of its energy and I would need to ready another defense while preparing an attack. I quickly slipped on my amulet and while the staff stopped I readied a simple stun curse. Using it I knocked out most of them. I then called my Horrid Grazzle (a type of dragon that could, in a pack of 5, possibly even kill a Seadragonus Maximus Giganticus) to dispose of them a.k.a. eat them. As it started upon the frogs I tore down the hive. There in the still-settling dust was the DRAGONS EYE SAPPHIRE. My Grazzle finished of the frogs and then grudgingly flew me home.

Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a elephant and knew I was in trouble. The earth started to shake. And I started to run as fast as I could. I was yelling at the top of my lungs “STAMPEDE”! It finally ocered that I was alone and the yelling wasn’t helping. So I stopped yell and ran faster. All of a sudden the earth shook even more. It was getting closer! I jumped on a low hanging limb. Hand I couldn’t hang on any longer and I dropped. And I landed on the elephant. Wooooo was that a bumpy ride. He like started to leap in the air. And I started to try to find somthing to hold on to because I wasn’t going to jump off. The elephant just kept running. It was getting boaring. I wanted to know when it was going to stop. All of a sudden I don’t see any more land in the distance. I got a bad feeling. Then the elephant went to a skidding stop. And I looked down..............IT WAS A CLIFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I jumped off as fast as I could. And I turned around and it was the city. Then I turned back around it was the city over there too. I got very confused. And when I was walking down town very body was looking at me weird because I was touching every thing even the air to try to find the savanna. I never did find it and I am still confused.


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Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a elephant and knew I was in trouble. The earth started to shake. And I started to run as fast as I could. I was yelling at the top of my lungs “STAMPEDE”! It finally occurred that I was alone and the yelling wasn’t helping. So I stopped yell and ran faster. All of a sudden the earth shook even more. It was getting closer! I jumped on a low hanging limb. Hand I couldn’t hang on any longer and I dropped. And I landed on the elephant. Wooooo was that a bumpy ride. He like started to leap in the air. And I started to try to find somthing to hold on to because I wasn’t going to jump off. The elephant just kept running. It was getting boring. I wanted to know when it was going to stop. All of a sudden I don’t see any more land in the distance. I got a bad feeling. Then the elephant went to a skidding stop. And I looked down..............IT WAS A CLIFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I jumped off as fast as I could. And I turned around and it was the city. Then I turned back around it was the city over there too. I got very confused. And when I was walking down town very body was looking at me weird because I was touching every thing even the air to try to find the savanna. I never did find it and I am still confused.


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Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna, I heard the unmistakable sound of a zebra, and I knew that I wa sin trouble. I start to run but then I don't hear anything. So as I walk back to the camp site I hear the noise again. So I see how far I can get before Teh zebra or whatever is making the noise and it starts running at me. All of the sudden I see a zebra that is laying on the ground. I start to get closer but not to close I don't want it to kill me! Then as I am getting closer I see that the zebra can't get up or move. Walking a little closer I see a huge cut in the zebra. I figured that I can get closer because it can't move. I go to help the zebra. It looks like it was about to get eaten by some kind or animal before it heard me running through the woods! I look in my bag to see if I had something to wrap it with. I see the wrap so I take it and wrap the zebra with it. Then the zebra came home with me and never left my side. When I would be walking down the road everyone would be looking at me because I had a zebra walking with me. From that day on I was never going back into the woods by my self!

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Anonymous said...

As I surveyed the African savanna I heard unmistaken able sound of a Stampede and knew I had to run as fast as I could, unless I wanted to stay and get ran over and end my life. So I ran and ran and ran… I seemed to run forever and the stampede just followed me then I was a big sea of water. So I had to stop. I didn’t know what to do and so ran around in circles. This went on until the animals caught up to me and then I remembered I had a giant machine gun on my back so I faced the stampede and shot them all

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