Friday, September 05, 2008

Creative Juices

I know you all have great ideas in your heads because I get to hear them all day long. Now, get those creative juices going and write an ending to the following story starter. Be sure to use 100 words and check your spelling and grammar.


As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw.....

28 comments:

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw the most horrifying thing! The hugest line ever to see Senator McCain and Governor Palin. “This can’t be right?” Pete said to himself. As he stood in aw, a vender passed him on the street. “Get your McCain buttons here!” Pete asked him, “All these people can’t be here to see McCain and Palin speak? I mean, there aren’t even this many who live in this small town.” “Well sonny, when the word gets out that he’s coming, people come from all over.” The vender told him and started walking away. So Pete waited in line for a REALLY long time, but he had told all his friends it was worth it. He even got to shake their hands!

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw something that resembled a car but had tiny black squares from the middle of the hood to the back of the trunk. When he saw his boss Rick, he walked over to him and asked, “What is that thing?” The boss answered him, “Son that thing there is a new kind of car if Obama is elected president of the U.S.A.. It uses solar power to make it run because gas will be to expensive to buy.” “But what if McCain is elected president,” asked Pete, “what then?” “McCain will use the car then.”, said Rick ,” So now that you know what that car is can you help the guys that are buying items for the car, please?” “Yes I will help them.”, said Pete.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a deer as big as a bull staring right at him. (It was a 15 pointer.) (He heard about this deer but always thought it was a myth.) So there he was standing face to face with about a 150 pound deer. In Pete’s mind he was thinking what should I do? He thought about this for a while, but when he was thinking the deer ran away. So he tried to search for it to get a picture, but he never found him again. So he hung his head in shame. Later on that day Pete started to tell his friends about the deer, but they all laughed at him and changed the subject. So Pete was left alone and only wished to see the deer again.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner he stood in shock when he saw his little sister sitting next to a unicorn! He looked twice then rubbed his eyes to make sure he was really seeing what he thought he was seeing. Sure enough it was really there. Then his little sister Georgina yelled, “Surprise! Happy birthday!” Pete could not believe that his little sister got him a unicorn for his birthday! Although Georgina gets him pretty weird things every year for his birthday this by far had to be the weirdest. Pete was so excited because he thought he really had a pet unicorn, until he walked closer and realized that his unicorn was really just a motionless stuffed animal. Pete sighed. He could not believe he thought that the same five year old that got him a Barbie doll last year had actually got him a good present. All Pete had to say was, “thanks Georgina” In a disappointed voice.

Anonymous said...

As Peter rounded the corner, he saw a mule walking on 2 feet. He was so amazed that his eyes popped out of his head. For a minute, he could not see anything. Once he got his eyes back in his sockets, he focused on the mule. He now saw 2 mules there. They were dancing to the sound of the traffic. Peter thought that they were from the circus but there wasn’t a circus near here. The mule asked Peter a questioned, but Peter couldn’t answer because he was in shock+. He just stared. Peter started to hear a noise, a beeping noise. Finally, he realized it was his alarm and this was all a dream!

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a bank being robbed. He called 911 on his cell phone, but he had no reception. He then ran over a half mile trying to find an officer. He couldn’t find one! When he looked into the bank window he saw that the robber had hostages. He tried to sneak into the bank, but he stumbled and the robber heard him. The robber didn’t see him. Pete hid behind a desk. He could see the robber’s feet. “Must be hearing things,” said the robber. Pete crawled to another desk to get closer. He stood up behind the robber and knocked him out. He untied the hostages and flagged a policeman down and they arrested the bank robber.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw Mcain and Palin standing at his front door. He couldn't beileve it. It was his dream come true. So he opened the door. " Hello i'm John Mcain and this is my running mate Sara Palin." " Hello Mr. soon to be president." Pete said."I was driving through the neighborhood and I saw the signs in your front yard and i appreciate that you are for us. So I thought that i would give you some free goodies." And He handed him a bag. " I hope you enjoy." And they left.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw.....a fire engulfing The Chocolate Factory his face frozen in fear. It had already spread to Amy’s. Pete had been there so many times for his birthday parties Christmas. His eyes filled with tears and remembered his sister was working there today and ran into the fire he saw his sister on the ground still breathing. Pete pulled his sister out and went back in and saved several other lives. Pete got an award at school the next day and is an honored hero to the town and eats at the restored Chocolate Factory every day.

Anonymous said...

As pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw the space neddle leaning on it side and every body hollered and ran like little children so before it crashed pete ran up to it and he said, "Stand still." and it did and pete flew up in the air and picked it up and pushed it up right and all the towns people cherred and the the mayor gave him the key to the town hall and he went and thanked him and he left with the key in his hand and rounded the corner.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner he saw a Logama. This was very unfortunate because as we all know the Logama is a very mean animal. So Pete slowly turned back around the corner and ran. Unfortunately the Logama saw him and started chasing him. So since Pete was an unlucky man the logama caught up to him. It jumped on top of him and he fell over. Luckily his good luck kicked in. (finally) The Logama’s dog part of it kicked in and started licking him. So the Logama got off of him and Pete got up. So lessoned learned don’t turn corners when you are having bad luck.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner he stood in shock when he saw his own cartoon character, Jimmy flying in the sky with a Sopwith Camel biplane.”Hey, dude” Pete’s cartoon character yelled as he streaked by and with a waggle of his wings as he flew off. Pete followed his cartoon character back to his house, as Jimmy landed his Sopwith Camel Pete yelled “What on earth are you doing!” Jimmy shouted back, “I’m trying to apply for another comic strip”. “Why do you want to do that”. “Because, I want to be in a variety of comics”. Just then Pete woke up thinking what on earth I was dreaming.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw the Green Bay Packers. He went over to them and found a piece of paper on the ground and asked them to autograph it. He only got two autographs when Mike McCarthy and a bus pulled up. Mike told them to get on the bus to go to practice. He wouldn’t let Pete on the bus, so Pete went to the back of the bus and jumped on the bumper and rode with them to practice. When practice ended he got all of their autographs and started walking home but when he crossed the street Johnny Jolly on his bike hit him and Pete flew fifty yards and lost his paper. Then he went unconscious He woke up in the hospital and a dog walked into the room with Pete’s paper and right when Pete reached for it the dog ate it!

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw his friend Peter Hoppe getting sucked into his own i-pod. Pete tried to save Peter but couldn’t get there in time. When Pete looked at Peter’s i-pod he saw Peter dancing to SWEET HOME ALABAMA. While Pete was watching Peter he also got sucked into the i-pod. They had to think of a way out. Suddenly, they saw a light. Peter was walking toward the light when Pete said “ DON’T GO NEAR THE LIGHT.” Peter eventually convinced Pete to go toward the light. On the way there they danced to songs. One was SWEET CAROLINA and a couple of songs by Soulja Boy. When they ran through the light they came out to exactly where they were before they got sucked into the i-pod. When they opened their eyes, they saw their other friend named Jordan Wallock. It was a happy day for everyone.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner he stood in shock when he saw a giant alligator eating a car. It was amazing because I was in Cedarburg by the chocolate factory and it is unfortunate to see an alligator right in the middle of the road.just in a second a sumo wrestler swooped down from the sky with a giant light sabor. Him and the alligator battled for at least 3 hours.But something tragic happened the alligator bit out sumos belly out and the sumo died.But then something good happened Jordan the alligator tamer came in and kicked the alligator into shape.The alligator ended up being nice after all.But 3 people died Tyler pipkorn Zack Welter and Peter Hoppe.


THE END

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw Ryan Grant, Brett Farve, John Elway, and Dan Marino signing autographs at Lambeau Field! When Pete was standing in line to get their autographs the whole Super Bowl 1 and 2 team and the 1996 and 1997 team and the 1997 and 1998 team just appeared out of the sky. As soon as that happened a huge crowd appeared and Pete got pushed to the back of the line. So Pete got out his paintball gun and he would ask if the person would move and if the person did not move he would shoot them. So he finally got all of their autographs and went home to show his dad. Stay tuned for Pete number two.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner he stud in shock when he saw a fat kid running at him and the fat kid named beef wonted to trample him. So Pete ran so beef couldnt get him but Pete thought he could out run him because he was so fat. Then when beef almost got him he triped on his own fat Pete keped running till he got home which took 5 hours to get home. When he got his mom asked how was school Pete said if you say getting chased by a fat kid is good. Mom said Pete I’am sary.




The end

Anonymous said...

Pete round the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a kid getting sucked in to his DS game! “I’ll help you! Pete shouted!
But it was too late, when Pete tried to grab him he got sucked in too!
*When they recovered from this accident Pete and his friend started to yell for about 10 minutes. We join them after they were done*
“Umm… what game did we just get sucked in?” asked the kid.
“Pokémon Mystery Dungeon,” Replied the kid, “By the way my name is Jonathan Dobberful.”
“Well that’s good but how do we get out of HERE!!!” Pete yelled.
Suddenly the sky turned green and they heard a mysterious voice. “You are here for a reason,” The voice boomed, “The reason is to save a world!”
“Cool!” Jonathan exclaimed.
“What?” Pete exclaimed.
The voice continued, “You will have no memory of this no good bye!” boomed the voice.
“Wait…!” Pete yelled. But that’s all he got to say before they became knocked out.
*We rejoin are heroes waking up on a beach with no memory. We are seeing them just waking up.*
“What happened?” Pete asked himself.
Suddenly he saw a Pokémon’s face (Squirtle’s face) he yelled for about 2 minutes. During that time Jonathan woke up and screamed with him.
“Stop!” yelled the Squirtle, “Why are you two screaming!”
“Because you are talking!” Pete exclaimed.
“And squirtles aren’t supposed to talk!”
“Well then Bulbasaurs and Charmanders aren’t supposed to talk.” said the Squirtle.
“We know that!” yelled Pete, “They don’t talk either.
“Well then why are you talking?” said the Squirtle laughing.
“Because we are humans!” yelled Jonathan, “and humans talk.”
The Squirtle then started to laugh crazily. After laughing he said, “Why would a bulbasaur and a charmander say soothing as silly as that? If you don’t believe me look at your relation!”
Jonathan and Pete looked at your relation and…..
I will continue this story later

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded , the corner he stood in shook when he saw Ryan Braun , J.J. Hardy, Corey Hart, Ben Sheets, Yovani Gallardo, and Prince Fielder singing autographs at Miler Park. Then Pete went inside Miller Park but the Security pulled Pete out and said “ You have to wait 3:00 and have to have 30 dollars. So then he went to the arcade and played games until 2:30. When he was done playing it was 3:30 so he ran to his house and told his mom to get in the car and they got there it was 4:00 and Pete was at the back of the line so he waited then he was finally got their autographs.

Anonymous said...

Part 2 of my story….. We continue are story from when Pete and Jonathan were looking at their reflection. P.S it’s theirs not yours.
When Pete and Jonathan looked at their reflection they only saw a bulbasaur and a charmander looking up at them!
“Why are we Pokémon?” Jonathan asked the squirtle.
Pete just fainted instead of saying anything. When he came through he shouted, “WHY ARE WE POKEMON!”
The Squirtle replied, “What else would you be, plants?”
Pete and Jonathan yelled at the same time,”Because we are humans!”
“You are, well then come my house and we can talk about it,” the squirtle said, “By the way my name is Jordan W. but my friends call me JW.”
“Okay,” Pete said still shaken.
*We will rejoin are heroes tomorrow after talking with JW. By the way Pete is a bulbasaur and Jonathan is a charmander if you didn’t catch that.*

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw Tony Romo and T.O. and pretty much the rest of the Dallas Cowboy team staring at him! When he saw them he ran to Tony Romo and asked him for his autograph! Since Pete had no paper he asked him to sign his forehead. Then he went to T.O. and he singed his arm. Then once he got everyone else’s autograph they went out bowling and hung out the rest of the night! Then Pete and the Dallas Cowboys became good friends and Pete would travel around with the team. Pete was good friends with them forevermore!

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a green mohawk chewing on a dog bone, Barney with a chain saw and a dog with a pillow case on its head that was running around and bumping into stuff. Then a truck crash and marbles spilled out. Then a parade came and slipped on the marbles and knocked the pillow case off the dogs head but the dogs head wasn’t a dogs head it was a raccoon head. Pete run away but Big Foot jumped out and threw him to his grandma’s house his grandma walked out and asked if he wanted a cookie. He looked at the cookies and they were green with spiders in them. Just then he woke up. “Wow what a crazy dream” he said.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner he stood in shock when he saw a pot of gold! He looked around for a rainbow but it wasn’t even raining. It has got to be a trap he thought to himself. But still a pot of gold is not what you see every day. You could never just fall into a pit of money ordinarily. He stepped lightly as if there might be pressure stones. Just as he was about to reach out and touch the pot of gold when suddenly a little Irish man jumped out and hit him over the head with a golf club. Next poor Pete knew he was in Ireland. He tried to ask how to get back to the corner in his beloved Cedarburg WI. He found that little Irish man again and asked him to get back. “You foolish young man don’t you want ye gold!”The little Irish man exclaimed.
“I get to keep it?!!?”
“Only if ye beat me in golf the McNealy name is good in golf.”
Pete looked disgusted he HATED golf.
“Okay.” Pete said in a small shaky voice.
“3 holes will do.” Said McNealy
Pete shot all three under par. McNealy shot one over par.
“I won I won I won!!!!!!” Pete shouted with joy.
“Not so fast,” McNealy said, “I won we Irish want one over par.”
Good thing for Pete that an old wise wizard was watching and said that McNealy was a cheater. He got sent back home with double the gold and rain.
Three Months Later

Pete turned the corner on his bike coming back from goody shopping with his gold when he saw a pot of gold.
“Oh no, not EVER again.”
THE END

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in the shock when he saw candy world theirs everything you could see of candy there was all junk food sweet food so then Pete went home and it was dinner.It su8was cotton candy and chocolate and coke. Then Pete went to school next and for hot lunch was sugar and sweet suff and for drink thier was soda for hot lunch. And then and he was wearing cotton candy fluffy for has outfit . He was freaking out on this it was to weird for him but then he was on the couch sleeping and then screamed and he jumped and said that was just a dream and he mother came in and said what is going on I had a dream and explained to petes mother and Petes mother though he was crazy and said get some sleep.

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw candy start to fall from the sky! He ran toward the raining candy and all of the sudden, nerds and skittles started falling too! It was like heaven on earth. Pete called over his sister Margaret and she stared with amazement. They enjoyed a feast of candy. The sky was a giant piñata! They were having buckets and buckets of fun. They started to feel sick so the laid down. They rested for a while and when they felt better they started eating candy again. After awhile, Margaret said, we need some soda to go with all this candy. “What kind of soda do you want?” she asked her brother. “Root beer” he replied. Ok said Margaret. Ill have the same thing. It seemed all was well and better yet it was even a Friday. Pete was so happy until he heard his mom’s voice. She said, “Pete you have a 200 page essay that you have to do on the magnificence of Jesus' birth.”

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw his best friend that he hadn’t seen in so long. Pete hasn’t seen his friend George since he moved away to Georgia. As Pete ran to greet George, he ran away. Pete wondered why his friend ran, but didn’t dwell on that, he just wanted to find George. So, Pete ran home to get his bike so that he could ride around and try to find his friend. When Pete got tired of looking for George he decided to try and figure out where they were staying. He finally discovered that they were staying with George’s grandparents, so he rode his bike there. And sure enough, there was George!
George thought Pete was still angry with him for moving to Georgia, that’s why he ran away. But Pete explained that he got over it, he just misses his best friend!! And they did their special handshake and all was good!!

Anonymous said...

As Pete rounded the corner, he stood in shock when he saw a boy riding a hover skateboard. He had never seen anything like this in his whole life! When the boy was about to ride past him he asked him, "hey, where did you get that cool skateboard that rides like that?" "My dad made it for me", the boy replied. Pete asked the boy if his dad could maybe make one for him. The boy said, "ya, if I see you around sometime." Pete the asked if he could look at the skateboard a little closer just to see how it was made. He really wanted to know how his dad made it so it could fly. Then pete asked him what street he lived on. The boy said, "I live on Bloomer Street." That was the same exact street that Pete lived on. After talking they both realized that they only lived about a half of a block away from each other. His name was Jake and he had just moved to that house about a month ago. Pete went to Jake's the very next day and his dad made him a cool hover skateboard just like Jakes. Pete was so happy that he now had a new friend and a cool new skateboard! Pete and Jake rode their skateboards almost everyday!!

Anonymous said...

As pete round the corner , he stood in shock when he saw a MANBEARPIG eating Goerge W Bush. Suddunly BIGBIRD flies in, and stared to beet manbearpig. Then all of sudduned Elmo comes and stared to help bigbird. The battle goies on for 7hours. on the 3hour tyce, tyler, and Elmo die. On the 4hour John Macain and grover come to help bigbird ,but he dies any way. In the 5hour gover was eaten by manbaerpig. In the 6hour John Macain was almost killed but the grouch came and saved John Macain. Fanilly in the 7hour John Macain and the grouch kill the manbaerpig. Many people died that day.

Anonymous said...

Continuation....
Pete took his autographs home and hid them from his little brother. He was afraid his little brother might ruin them or loose them. Pete has learned from past experiences. Two days later Pete's best friend Tom came over and Pete said, "I have to show you my new autographs!"

"Wow, more autographs!” said Tom. "Let me see!"

Pete went to where he hid his autographs and he couldn't find them. "Oh, NO!", yelled Pete.

Pete and Tom looked all over Pete's bedroom for the autographs and still they couldn't find them.

Pete walked out of his bedroom to get his mother and in the hall he saw something. He walked closer and realized it was one of his autographs. It was sitting right outside of his little sister's bedroom. He opened the door and there she was with the rest of the autographs. "Now I have to make sure not to hid my things from my little brother in front of my little sister.", Pete said to Tom. They both laughed.