Friday, May 22, 2009

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Evan and Kyle were heading out for what they thought would be a peaceful camping trip in the northwoods of Wisconsin, but the weekend turned upside down when......

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Moe said...

… a thunder storm hit! It wasn’t any ordinary thunder storm no, this thunder storm developed a tornado! The boys didn’t know what to do they were all alone in the woods with no technology, compass not any shelter (except for their tents) and they were left with barely no food. Evan and Kyle tried to find a ditch but there wasn’t any in sight. They thought that they were going to die after what they heard about the last thunder storm that developed into a tornado and they didn’t want to even think about it, but all that they could do was not go near any metal stay low to the ground and pray and pray and pray. So they did all of these things but the thunder storm did not go away. It had been three days know and they were starved. Finally on the fourth day the sky cleared up and everything cleared up, but when they looked around them everything but them was struck by lighting. The grass started to burn into flames and Evan and Kyle got trapped in a ring of fire and couldn’t get out. What will happen will they die or live? To be Continued.

Stewart said...

...Lebron James came and camped right by them. At first they thought it was cool and tried to get his autograph, but some body guards stopped the boys. Then every heard that Lebron James was there, so they all drove over there, and one of them hit Evan and Kyle's car. Then the car wouldn't start. There were so much people there that if Evan and Kyle would sleep in their tents, another random person would go and sleep in his tent. Evan and Kyle decided to leave and go to another place. When they got there everything was quiet, and then Kobe Bryant started camping by them, The boys asked for his autograph but he gave them tickets to the rest of the Lakers games because they did not stay by his rival. But now everyone heard that Kobe Bryant was there, so they all came to Kobe Bryant but Evan and Kyle went back to Lebron James. He gave them all tickets because they didn't stay by Kobe, his rival. When the boys got back, they sold the tickets that were on the same Night and ended up going to most of the Lakers games when the Cavaliers were playing because Lebron James originally didn't give them his autograph.

gota dash said...

A huge hungry bear came out of the woods. It growled at them and attacked them. They played dead and covered their necks with their hands. The bear came up to them, sniffed them, and walked away. They got up and ran in the opposite way towards their cottage. They reported the bear to the ranger, who went to go find the bear. But came back, saying he couldn’t find the bear. They put up noisemakers to keep the bear away while they slept. The next morning they woke up to find the bear tangled up in the noisemakers. They called the ranger and he took the bear to a zoo and was named woody< for he lived in the woods near cabins.

luv acting! said...

When... a tornado hit in the middle of the night! Kyle woke up just in time to wake up Evan and get to a lower place. They found a cave and went into it. They stayed in there a while until they started falling asleep. They woke up to the noise of a bear also awakening they started sneaking out of the cave to avoid the bear ( by now the tornado had passed) and they made it out safely only to find that their campsite and supplies were destroyed by the tornado. Evan started panicking but Kyle stayed calm and came up with the idea that they would divide the chores in half and have Evan collect food while Kyle would make a shelter and a way of transportation home ( a.k.a. a boat) They worked hard all day when suddenly Evan's cell phone went off then he moved and it stopped he moved back and got reception again! So he called for help while Kyle was busy being furious that he did all that work just to find out that his friend could have called for help the whole time!

HANNAH said...

it started to rain they thought it was justalight drizzle so they kept going. By the time they got there everything was wet and cold and since it was raining they make a fire and since there was no fire the where cold. they decided tomarrow might be a better day. So they got in thier tents and fell asleep .Kyle woke up in the middle of the night to a bad dream suddenly he realized he was on his inflatebable bed floating down the road heading for a topsign he jerked to the side but that was a big mistake next to the road was a small hill going down to the river. At that moment he wondered where evan was was he in the tent well that was impossible. just then he grabed a tre trunk and tried to hiold on the bed flw out from under him the water was deep by the river th river had over flown. Just then in the distance he could see somthing bright(Since it was still night) and he heard his name. It was evan in a boat when they got Kyle to saftey they told him how they think he got down by the river. Evan fgot up ion the night to use the bathroom and probably left the tent zip door open the water probably lifted you up and carried you. Your lucky Evan told me about the flooding ho did you know whaen I was in the bathroom the water started to come in. I wa s really luky.

The End

Hannah said...

sorry miss miller that was sloppy here it is again...
it started to ain. They thought it was just a light drizzle so they kept going. By the time they got there, everything was wet and cold. Since it was raining, they tried to make a fire but since there was no fire they were cold. They decided tomorrow would be a better day. They got in their tents and fell asleep. Kyle woke in the middle of the night to a bad dream. Suddenly he relized he was on his inflateable matress floating down the road heading for a stop sign. He jerked to the side but that was a big mistake. Next to the road was a small hill going down to the river. At that moment he wondered where Evan was. Was he in the tent? Well that was impossible. Just then he grabbed a tree trunk and tried to hold on but the bed flew out from under him. The water was deep and flowing fast. Just then, in the distance, he could see something bright (it was still night) and he heard his name. It was Evan in a boat! When they got Kyle to saftey they told him how they think he got down by the river; Evan got up in the middle of the night to use the bathroom and probably left the tent door unzipped. The water came in and lifted him up and carried him away. You're lucky Evan told me about the flooding. How did you know? When I was in the bathroom, the water started to come in. Wow! I was really lucky!
The End

Hidden Mickey said...

They got trapped in the middle of a lake! The motor died on the boat and Kyle wanted to row back to shore. Kyle knew that his twin brother always had a compass.
“Hey Evan!” shouted Kyle, “got your compass?” Kyle was expecting the usual response, yes Evan had his compass but this time Evan replied
“Nope.”
The twins tried to pick out where North was but it was very hard. All around them were trees. Lots and lots of trees. After a while all those trees began to look the same.
“We are surely in for it.” Kyle stated pointing to the sky growing darker by the second.
RRRRRRRRRRRumble. BOOOOOOOOOM. Crackle. The twins watched the sky light up with lightning. The storm made up their mind for them. Kyle paddled as franticly as possible towards the shore which was about a mile away. Kyle saw Evan’s baby blue shirt become navy blue in all a matter of seconds with this downpour. Evan shook his long sandy blond hair away from his eyes and Kyle did the same. The rain made it hard to see with their hair plastered to their faces! Evan estimated that they were about a half mile away from the shore and the boy’s switched places with Evan now rowing. BOOOOOOOOOM. That sound reminded Evan that he better get his show on the road. Evan paddled faster and faster with every lightning strike. After it seemed like forever they reached shore. The twins beached their boat and took all their belongings with them. They needed to find shelter, and fast! After a long while of walking the boys found a small cottage. Rap, Rap, Rap. Evan knocked hard on the wooden door. An older man with hair as white as a fresh blanket of snow answered.
“Hello” he said to Kyle.
“Hi,” Evan stated, “We were stuck in that storm and are boat’s motor died and I lost my compass and we have no clue where we are.”
“I’m Kyle and he’s Evan” Kyle added quickly
“Kyle! Evan!” Right then the twins realized that this was their grandfather!
“Come in come in, I haven’t seen you two since you were 11!”
The boys were 17 now and they must have not noticed their grandfather.
“Here have some hot chocolate and sit down by the Fire.”
“Thanks!” both boys were overjoyed to get something warm.
“You boys can stay overnight and then in the morning I will help you fix your boat and give you some compasses.”
“Okay!”
“There are two extra beds in the back room you can sleep back there.”
The boys found their way to the back room. Their clothes were still damp but the fire had dried them off a lot.
The Next Morning
The boys got up and joined their grandfather in his shed. Their grandfather got up early and put together a kit with some food, ponchos, first aid, and, some compasses. By twelve thirty in the afternoon the boys were in their boat sailing off to their campsite.
By 2 o’clock the boys were safely in their tent cooking a late lunch. After all of their travels (and after lunch of course) the boys settled in for a good long nights sleep

Striker said...

Evan and Kyle were heading out for what they thought would be a peaceful camping trip in the north woods of Wisconsin, but the weekend turned upside down when… a gigantic tortoise fell from the sky and landed on Kyle as they were setting up their tent. Evan started asking Kyle some questions. “Who is the President of the United States?” Kyle answered, “Kobe Bryant.” “Who am I?” “Kobe Bryant.” Kyle answered again. Then Evan said, “No I am Evan Longoria and Kobe Bryant is not the president of the United States. At least not yet he isn’t.” Evan Longoria quickly drove Kyle to the hospital and Kyle recovered smoothly.

Moby said...

So they went to sleep Then Kyle woke up to get something to eat and there was weird noises coming from the outer forest like wolf noises They herd them closer and closer until it jumped out Evan and Kyle ran and ran and got away from the creature and got lost then Kyle said that it sounded like a wolf but was running on two legs. Then they saw a dash of black and got scared and were running and they got back to their campsite and made a trap and the beast found them and avoided it and jumped on Kyle and Kyle suddenly woke up screaming and Evan said what is wrong oh It was just a dream.

MOOSES21 said...

There was a giant snowstorm that covered everything luckily Kyle had a portable heater, and Evan had like a years supply of food. Then there was a strange cabin to miles east it had a hot tub a heating waterfall a game room and a spa. Evan and Kyle went there right away. They were invited to stay there for however long they liked the asked if they could maintain a permanent residence there and they said yes. They had never ever felt better. Next thing you know the both woke up in their tents and it was a beautiful summer day they were just dreaming “awwww darn” said Kyle, and guess what it happened all over again!!!!

Streak said...

Pancakes came raining down on them so they had to eat there way out and then Evan said “at least it’s not worse…”
Then out of the blue came foaming at the mouth pancake eating dogs that attacked Evan and Kyle and ate the pancakes and tore up there clothes and ran back into the woods.
Exhausted and tired they rested on a so called “rock” but, it was a giant scaly dragon. The dragon blasted fire at there heads and they where blind for life and surely you don’t want to know how they died ok, I will tell you any way they fell off a cliff into sharp rocks and where never herd of again. The end.

Dancer 9721 said...

When…… it started to rain. So Evan and Kyle went into their tent. They ate some of the snack mix that they brought along and played cards for 3hours. Even said that he was hungry for fish so the brothers took their fishing polls and headed out. When they got outside they could not believe their eyes! The river they had set up their camp by was over flowing BIG TIME!!! How did this happen? The brothers wondered. It was just a light sprinkle when they went into the tent. No time to think! They picked up all they could hold and ran for high ground. Thankfully they found some and no harm came to them.

Small fry said...

A huge canyon opened up right in front of them “let’s get out of here Kyle said to Evan”. They ran and ran but whenever they looked back the canyon was still behind them. But then to their delight a helicopter came flying past. “There’s a helicopter” Evan yelled. “I’ll get my emergency pack “said Kyle. “You brought that” Evan said. “My mom said I should bring it’ Kyle said. So Kyle raided a flair. He fired it. “Yes” Evan yelled. The helicopter pilot landed his helicopter and picked Evan and Kyle up and flew them home.

moni said...

...they entered a land of rainbows and unicorns. There was a majestic ocean with friendly sea animals that wouldn't hurt a fly.They loved to splish and slash in the pink lemonade ocean water. Although this water was not salty... it was sweet and tasted yummy! These creatures were called namboomboos! The owners were mermaids and mermans! They were the most beautiful creatures you had ever seen1 Even more stunning than vampires! They lived in an underwater city called Lithatonia. This city sparkeled for miles and miles. Evan and Kyle needed sun glasses to protect their eyes from the blinding sparkles! "Wow!" Evan said,"We finally found Lithatonia!" Kyle replied,"Cool beans, man!" Kyle and Evan were taken by mermaids to their leader, Kingston. He had a special mission for them. They had to find the missing light-up unicorn pen. The king was not able to write in his merman dairy wihtout it. Although it was a once in a lifetime opportunity, the two boys would be in a lot of danger.................there was a CRACKIN!!!!!!!

Soccer Luver34 said...

When Tony Romo appeared in front of them! He asked if they wanted to play some catch the boy said yes because who would not want to play catch with the best quarterback ever! So Tony Romo passed the ball to Kyle. It hit Kyle right in the arm like a bullet. The football snapped Kyle’s arm right in half in other words he broke his arm. So Evan rushed Kyle to the emergency room and had his arm fixed. Kyle wasn’t mad a Romo because he knew that he couldn’t control his strength! So much for that camping trip!

tycenator 3000 said...

Evan and Kyle were heading out for what they thought would be a peaceful camping trip in the northwoods of Wisconsin, but the weekend turned upside down when.....They were sleeping in the tent and suddenly the tent started shaking violently and suddenly a bear ripped through the tent and scarred both of them to death and the bear nearly killed both of them.After that they started running and running until they finally found a very safe spot but the bear frollowed them and againthey were both almost killed but evan remebered I have my cell phone he took it out of his pants called his parents and they picked them up.They were releved. the end

Yoshi said...

When a magical portal opened! It was all purple with blue lines. Evan and Kyle started blankly at it. Suddenly, a red hand came out and grabbed Evan.
“Nooooo!” screamed Kyle as Evan was being dragged in. Kyle dried to hold on to Evan, but it was too late. The hand fully pulled Evan in, but as soon as the portal was going to close Kyle quickly jumped in after him.
“Ahhhh!” screamed Kyle as he was falling through the purpleness. He could see the red hand go somewhere else, but the force of gravity was too strong for Kyle as he fell and fell and fell. Suddenly, he landed on a… giant pillow!
“What luck,” Kyle exclaimed, “I’m alive, but where am I?”
Kyle looked around he saw a huge castle and some small building next to it. He asked the passing man, “Where am I?”
He replied with an annoyed look on his face, “Underbridge, now if you want to know more, don’t ask me!” and the man stormed off.
“Wow, pleasant people,” rolling his eyes. Wondering where Evan could be. Then something dawned on him. “Wait a minute, why is there a castle here? There isn’t any castle, they stopped making castle after the cannon was invited!”
Kyle started to look around in the village he saw a blacksmith, targets with archers shooting arrows, and a town crier. Suddenly Kyle put 2 and 2 together and figured out something. He figured out that, “I must have traveled back in time!” Kyle suddenly blurted out.
Everyone looked at him and then got back to work. He thought to himself, “I must find a way back to our time and find Evan. There must be someone that can help.” He looked around again, this time he saw a knight come the town. Kyle right away got an idea. He rushed over to the knight and said, “Sir Knight my friend has been taken by a red hand!”
The knight suddenly looked like he was going to burst with anger, he said to Kyle, “Follow me, for this is the 5th one this week!”
Kyle follows the knight to a huge wasteland. The knight shouted out, “Come out Alexander!”
Suddenly, a huge, 10 feet tall, red dragon appears! The red dragon has in his left hand Evan! The knight and the dragon look each other straight in eyes and then started battling. It was a fierce fight, and they both look that they would die of battling too hard. But then, the knight threw his sword and it hit the dragons hard and the dragon dies with a load shake. The knight rushes past Kyle to go tell everyone that he won. Kyle rushes up to Evan and asked, “Are you okay?”
Evan replies, “Yes I’m okay, but why is there a dragon in a wasteland anyways?”
As soon as Kyle was about to reply, the body of the dragon disappeared and a purple portal appeared in its place. “Yay! This is our ticket home!”
Before Evan could say anything, Kyle grabbed Evan and jumped through the portal. They landed at their campsite.
“Wow!” Evan told Kyle, “what adventure!”

Matt said...

Things started to go upside when they pulled out of the drive way. The belt to the car fell off and it took them a hour to fix. They finally got back on the road. Once they arrive at the camp site the owner came out with no shirt on and his belly button huge and sticking out very far. He scared them both so much that they couldn't sleep the entire night. They also had trouble with the tent. They couldn't get it to stay up. Once they did it started to rain and rain and rain. People came to visit. They told them that it should stop shortly but it didn't. It got harder and harder. They all crowded under a tarp. They put their last dry clothes on. Then a big wind came and dumped water all over them. That was the end. The packed up and went home. They still laugh about it today! PS This is all true. It happened to our family!!!!

Cookie said...

The sky turned black and all you could see was the stars and the moon, like night, but it was too early for that, then they realized that something was going on. Some of the stars weren’t really stars, they were getting bigger, brighter and moving rapidly around the sky! Then, they suddenly heard a sound like an airplane but it was getting louder and louder and the star was getting bigger and brighter, then a large metal saucer hit the ground! They heard a door open and they saw figures that looked like people. They were astronauts that had abandoned their space shuttle because of a malfunction. Soooooo, it certainly wasn’t a normal camping trip!!

fofa said...

Evan and Kyle were heading out for what they thought would be a peaceful camping trip in the northwoods of Wisconsin, but the weekend turned upside down when a family of big foots came and kid napped them there was two fully grown big foots witch Evan and Kyle thought were the mom and dad and one little one that the guest was the kid. They careded the for a long time and Kyle fell asleep she woke up in a hammock about 50 feet above the ground she looked around and saw lots of things that looked like tree houses
And lot creatures that looked like big ewoks. She remembered what happened and quickly Scand the trees for Evan who was in a hammock next her soon the big foots let them done and told them they were in a secret land were fantasy creaters like unicorns lived and it was their job to pretext is so they protected is for the rest of their lives .

elmo said...

As they were driving out to the woods they lost control of their car and drove off the road and crashed into a tree. They had no clue where they were so they decided to look on the map they had brought but it had gotten all torn up during the car wreak. The nearest gas station was way too far to walk to. But since that was the only thing they would be able to they decided they would go ahead and try to walk to the gas station. But just then they remembered that they had their cell phones so they were able to call for help.

JW said...

...aliens abducted them from their campsite as soon as Evan and Kyle had finished putting up their tent. Before they knew it they were landing on Venus. The trip seemed like it only took minutes. The door of the UFO opened and the aliens motioned to Evan and Kyle to walk out of the spaceship. There was a whole village of aliens. Evan and Kyle couldn't understand what the aliens were saying at all. The aliens tied one of Evan's and one of Kyle's legs to the spaceship. The boys knew they had to somehow escape. Kyle said, "Man, all we wanted to do was go on a nice relaxing camping trip."

"I have my pocket knife," said Evan. Evan cut Kyle and himself free. They quickly and quietly got back into the spaceship and flew back to Earth. "Thank goodness the spaceship has auto-pilot," said Evan.

"Yeh," said Kyle, "otherwise we probably would never had made it back home." "So much for our relaxing camping trip."

bobbyjack said...

When they were driving home from there peaceful camping trip they hit a rock and they tumble down and down and they got dizzie rolled out of their car then it stared rainy snowballs and they kept and they kept rolling down the hill .Then both got to an old rickety cabin people help them up but Evan and Kyle went down and kept rolling down they stopped and got to this old town like they were in town back then well a matter a fact they were they landed all in this little town that gave everything away for free and it was colorful and all they was candy ,cotton candy but want it was a carnival town all they had was a rides . But after the fact it was really a dream and they tumbled down and up while snowballs were hitting them and got in there half way broken car and drove away.

nemo said...

a bat flew into there tent and so they ran outside then there was a bear that started chasing them through the forest as they were running they ran into a cave and they slep in the cave for the night and the next day they woke up and they were surrounded by bears and so they shocked and diddn't know what to do so they sat there and in a little while the bears then ate them. THE END

popkornshrimp said...

they got traped in a middle of a lake with ali gators and sharks. then there was a big storm with a tornato and sucked them in and they fell off there boat into the a water then the nexed morning htey wer washed up on shore not even tuched by the sharks and aligatos. so they whent to there camp sight that nigh and there was a big hewedg bare came roning out of the wolds and was chasing them intill the bear ran out of energy and they lived hapley ever lasting.

Jack Nibbs said...

When Evan went into cardiac arrest when he was picking up sticks for their fire. Luckily Kyle was right behind him, and Kyle helped him to safety. Kyle takes out his cellular device and is ready to call 911, when it occurs to him that he should check on Evan first. Kyle takes a few looks at Evan, and comes to the conclusion that he is dead anyway, so he does not even bother to call 911. So instead, Kyle starts a fire and calls Pizza Hut for some delivery. After he almost finishes the pizza. Kyle drives to Nebraska for an extented vacation.